| "Return of the Bijus" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: AtlantisWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I certainly hope you haven't forgotten about your fics or anything like that. I understand that school has started, leaving very little time for writing. I really do love your stories and hope you will have time to update them soon. As for the ratings, you seem to be having trouble coming up with new things for your fics, reducing your creativity/originality. I can easily understand how there are (VERY) high degrees of similarity between certain parts of each fic (such as the 2nd part of the Chuunin exam), but there are other parts that also seem almost copy&paste from other fics of yours. And of course there are many spelling/spacing errors throughout all of your fics. I hope you view this as constructive criticism, and not the other kind. I AM trying to be helpful. In the not-too-distant future, you can expect a very detailed review from me on several of your fics, via PM.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yet again im speachlesso i thought that 'A TAIL OF TWO BIJUS' might have been a fluke or somthing, im not doubting your ability as a writer rather my luck on finding such a good one, but youve created another incredible fic that had me glued to the screen seriously think you should be doing this as a career cant wait for next chapter so pls pls PLS dont torture me and keep me waiting too long im in agonny here p.s hope ur thinking bout doing another sequel in this series of your fics enjoying them emensely and dont want them to end =)
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Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 14:37 CDT
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Oh, and A Tale of Two Bijus and i loved it. istayed up all night reading it and then reading this and i love it so much! I was just wandering if it would be possible to make a fanart of Naruto and Yukiko as depicted in your story. That would be sweet/cool/rad whatever you want to call but i would really appreciate it
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Title: Your story is cool!
Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is totally fuckin awesome story. Its really cool. and i think anyone who doesnt like ur story is a jackass!Please update soon! its torcher not knowing whats gonna happen next! Please? If not for me do it for the rest of the fans. I would donate money to you if you would continue the story but i dont have a bank account... heh, sorry
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Title: Your story is cool!
Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is totally fuckin awesome story. Its really cool. and i think anyone who doesnt like ur story is a jackass!Please update soon! its torcher not knowing whats gonna happen next! Please? If not for me do it for the rest of the fans. I would donate money to you if you would continue the story but i dont have a bank account... heh, sorry
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Title: Waaah
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 20:38 CDT
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Wahhhhhhhhhhh update pwease :( Also, you seem to be concentrating on Naruto's team more than on him and Yukiko :(
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Title: PLZ UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: David1582 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG YOU ARE THE BEST AUTHOR INT HE HISTORY OF MANKIND!I gotta read all your stories now... Can I ask a request? Please don't write any Yaoi or Yuri stuff... I hate those stories so much I wanna stab the authors! GARRRGH! Anyway keep up the good work! :D P.S. I'm a christian so can you please not use like GOD DAMNIT or JESUS CHRIST! In your stories... I mean you don't have to me and that you hate people who push their religion on you but can you not use them as often?
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Title: NAME!
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 17:03 CDT
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Yo, here is a name for ya. Kinshirabi xD took me a whole freakin week 0o
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 21:43 CDT
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uh, the third and Genko Hayate died. the third's funneral was ep 80 i think. Genko Hayate was killed by Kabuto. you left your address on the internet? i find it amusing too on how you get the notes... i would have just told them give me reviews if you are so eager to find out.
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a whlie since I last reviewed. As always your story comes out on top!! Update soon!! I love this fic!!!
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to "Bellatrix "Vecours" I'm not trying to be a suck-up or anything but I really love this story. "The Judge" "Raman man" "Dancing wind" "ERO-DEMON" and "White-Knight" love this story too so UPDATE for us please.
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Reviewed By: Bellatrix Vecours On: July 31, 2006 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darling Specula, Are you on the rag or something? You messeged me, saying that i shouldn't talk about your grammar. Well darling, i though that was what reviews were for. I didn't intend to hurt your obviously fragile feelings. You also stated that i can't possibly understand because i do not write. And you are wrong in that assumption, i simply have more then 1 penname. I beta 4 stories as well and spend plenty of time doing grammar checks a day. Take my review for what it is, constructive critiscm. Maybe you don't see it much, but there it is.
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 26, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll Check everyday for a new chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will check every so often to see if you've updated the story. And in case your wondering the answer is yes it is THAT DAMN GOOD!!!
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Title: The Master
Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! YOU ARE A TRUE GENIUS FOR COMING UP WITH THIS STORY!!! And for what it's worth I already read " A tail of two Bijuus" before I read this!!!
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