| "The Hardest Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: spinnymonkey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 22:03 CDT
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im not done with youR story yet but it freaking rocks! more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EHEHHEHEH OKAY BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: WolfDaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 15:07 CST
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Awesome fic! (Even if it did make me cry). The one thing I'm curious about is why Hiei didn't use his Jagan to see. I'm sure that even though it's not a normal eye he still could have made use of it.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:04 CDT
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very nice...my only complaint was that there was no lemon, but its great as is
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Title: HieiLover#?
Reviewed By: foxfire9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Cute and original! Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has been up for over a year and only gotten these reviews??? What is wrong with people?? This was a great story (and you even finished the bloody thing ^_~ ). Amazing how losing sight can make some things more clear ne?
And if I may, on the off chance that ashleystarfighter wanders back ... everyone knows that Kurama CAN take on a ningen, but they also know he won't. If he does, he has to face prosecution by the Reikei AGAIN. Even in a human body, he's still a youko and subject to both sets of laws accordingly. (Hows that for an answer) |
Reviewed By: Rose Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 17:00 CST
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I called Hiei a sanjiyan, which is, from what I understand, the term for a three-eyed demon. It was used in 3x3 Eyes, and I've seen it used elsewhere. It's definitely not a DBZ reference. |
Reviewed By: ashleystarfighter On: March 25, 2003 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good but there were a few things I found questionable, 1) why couldn’t kurma take those boys from yuskey’s school he’s a couple thousand year old yoko, who is way better than any human. (although I under stand why you would put it like that so that Hiei could get his sight back) 2)even if Hiei was blind in his eyes he still got the third one up top of his head (I cant spell it ) I believe it would aid him in seeing and I still don’t think he would be so helpless he has other senses. (but again I under stand why you made it like that , so kurma could help him)
Any way it was over all great. But you called Hiei a sayian . Why? |
Reviewed By: Kiriska [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*sparkly eyes* I love it! *waves banners that say 'HieixKurama Forever'* Waiiii! Write more! |
Reviewed By: Kitt SSEH On: July 08, 2002 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the most part I loved this fan fic, and Kurama and Hiei's inter action was cute. I don't know enough about Hiei to say if He's OOC or not, but he was sort of wimpy in some spots. But hey, I know I wouldn't be the same if I lost everything over and over. -_-; so I think how he acts is justified... |
Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 On: June 22, 2002 22:14 CDT
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Hope you get the other parts of this up soon.
I mean this needs a sequel and a prequel.
Great story. |
Reviewed By: Kitsune Hashiba On: June 20, 2002 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just absolutely LOVED this fic! You probably get this alot, but I think you're one of the best writers out there. I can't wait to see the prequel promised!(in chapter 11) There is NO WAY you are going to get out of writing that one if I can help it. Anyways... I kinda got bored one afternoon... and I was looking around the web... saw this story... drew you a fanpic... =^-^= If you want just e-mail me at pokenami@aol.com and I'll try to get to a scanner that I know how to use... Erm... anyways, contact me if you think my pics worthwhile... (Or if you need a beta reader... I do that too...) |
Reviewed By: aaa On: June 03, 2002 00:40 CDT
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HA! Right a seuquel when yuuske or however you spell it kick those guys azzes!!! Hiei better not get another disease or disability or something!!!!!!!!!I love this fic!!!1 |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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(eyes are about to pop out of her sockets) HOW DARE YOU HURT HIEI-CHAN AND KURAMA-KUN! (Hiei gives her a death glare) Uh-oh... (hides behinds Kurama, hiei stops glaring and looks away) He-hee! I love it! Even if it is yaoi! These two are such a kawaii couple. They are bishounen too! keep up the good work! |
