| "Mission Impossible" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 00:15 CDT
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I'm fairly certain I've read this before, though it seems I didn't leave a review. I'll probably be reading it a few more times before the end of September too, as I'm finally managing to go the 2860 miles to Yaoi con this year. ^_^ I really love this fic. It's such fun! Thanks for writing! Your overly excited fangirl, --jess
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml (too lazy to login) On: August 16, 2007 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this!! I love how you made Heero have to figure out what it was he was feeling - and that it took him a while to realize what it meant. Relena as a rabid fangirl!! Priceless! LOL! This is one of the best stories written in this tense that I've read. Great job! ~Duchess~
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 11:50 CST
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Damn, looks I did forget to put up a review on this one. Okay, first off, Heero and Duo as a couple, damn *looks at groin, sizable erection*, damn they;re hot. Now if only Heero weren't such a prick during hte rseries sometimes. Not to mention, after EW, what was with some of those looks they shared? Seriously, Duo would have taken things up, over easy, but Heero would be the question, es obvioso. Anyway, loved this story (it is soooo cute!) Still, love your stories, and I'd love to see how the Anime con goes at the end of the epilogue. Maybe Wufei and the otehr Pilots would be there? And how are their own relationships going, hmmm? Valid questions, requiring valid answers. ANyway, later, and good luck with your stories.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 15:54 CST
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Sweet, sexy, and a great view into the enigma that is Heero Yuy! I loved the fic keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 11:04 CST
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LMAO as a catholic I know well about that psalm but never before has it sounded so hillarious. I am not at all offended and as always I love the work you've done! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I don't know what to say about this one. I do like it and would read it again. I guess I find Hiro's analysis of his feelings for everything going on around him and his reactions to Duo the most interesting. As always great job.
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Title: Well Ma Fa Tek Me Fra w'Ho...
Reviewed By: Kalico again On: July 30, 2006 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet. Loved it. This one fooled me too from the summary. but it was still awesome. i take it Heero and Duo are your fave couple. It's nice. Totally. now i'll go find some more stuff to read. i willy want and need a new story from you...It's gonna be my birthday soon. When, you ask? uhm...August the 30th or 31st, maybe the 28th or Sept. 1st...yo no se...it's kinda complicated really. my birth certificate says something, my passport says something else , school records say another date and my adoption papers say a whole different thing...so i opted to choose my b'day. August 30th yup. which happens to be 2 days after school opens so that sucks. i'll be in school on my b'day. so plz make my day by sending me a fic gift if you have the time. if not, that's cool too. thanks.
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Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story. It really did become one of my instant favorites. Great work!
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Reviewed By: Jupitorknight On: July 28, 2006 10:54 CDT
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Wow what a great story I loved it. A friend of mine read it and she just about died laughing she thought it was perfect as well. You again have shown us what a gift you have for writing wonderful stories not only oneshot lemons but stories with a plot.
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear god! I missed two chaps because of exams and you go and out the 1x2 up in them! This is so unfair! Yet...even with the delay in reading them I must say you got me re-addicted! I just Knew there Would be an attempt on Relena but you surprised me with the dart - its unconventional. Duo is so sweet yet seductive and Heero is confised but determined and together they just make me *swoon* wishing they were real and I was one of the lucky maniacs in your story's yaoi convention that got to see them kiss...All in all I expect a new chap and some lemony goodness eagerly!
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Reviewed By: Meefmonster and Kix On: July 19, 2006 13:21 CDT
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ARRGGG you evil evil little munchkin type perosn...how dare you leave us with a clifhanger like that(but tyhen agaain...lots fo writers do that...) pardon my bad typing my computer sucks major right now..so we'll just leave and give you kisses and hope you update verry verry soon
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Liei On: July 18, 2006 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't stop!!! I can't wait to read the rest of the fic...it keeps you on your toes and I'm so excited to see more...PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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Title: Don't stop
Reviewed By: Liei On: July 18, 2006 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please finish this fic!! It's awesome and I can't wait to see how it ends!!!!
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 19:46 CDT
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Wow, all i can say is wow!! It's perfect!! The story keeps you on your toes and the plot make you want to read more. I really like your idea and I woud love to read more!! MangaChild420 akak A-jay
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Reviewed By: sacared and alone On: July 15, 2006 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i have to say is MORE DAMM IT!:D i lovvvveee this story sssooo much and i soo can not waite for more!
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:17 CDT
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You are an evil, evil author and...I love it! I'd spill praise for your talent and the incredibly addictive story you're writing but I'm too giddy to do so right now. The only thing I Can do is plead, beg and grovel for more, more, more...did I mention more? Please? *offers a Quatre doing the puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 13, 2006 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry this is in such a hurry and so short .But I wanted to let you know that I'm still reading your story and I am really enjoying it .So please update again soon and keep up the great story telling..I'm headed for Kansas to have so fun wish me luck ...
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Reviewed By: PATTT 40 On: July 13, 2006 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry this is in such a hurry and so short .But I wanted to let you know that I'm still reading your story and I am really enjoying it .So please update again soon and keep up the great story telling..I'm headed for Kansas to have so fun wish me luck ...
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely captivating! The story has it all - a little intrigue with the constant tension around the mission - one can never be sure what could happen,humor that is subtly sexual and yet plain enough to make you flush, you could even say it had a smudge of parody in there - after all its about an anime convention :) I simply melt in a puddle of gundam wing goo at your characterisations of Heero, Duo and even Relena who I quite dislike. You've manage to breathe unbelievable life into them and make then so realistic I feel I can touch them! ( don't I wish lol). the tension between our two favorite bishounen is plesantly tortorous! The style of the fic is light yet in-depth enough to boost the plot and characters to present them in a believable world that takes the action out of the fic and into the reader's life! In other words - I love it! Please continue to write and update as fast as possible! Thank you for bringing enjoyment to fiction addicts like me with your work :)
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Title: *cough, cough, hack, hack*
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 01:53 CDT
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Dear god I love you. Keep up the good work, love the pairings that you are showing off, they are all favorites of mine, and I hope you keep the yaoi coming on full blast. The panels are going to be especially wonderful, I can't wait! Update again soon!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: kamigirl On: July 09, 2006 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic. i like the way its written, it seems so easy to read, and just flows great. i absolutely love the whole setting. i absolutely love heero as the less experienced in the closet, clueless character, and the perfect situation duo and heero are in. i'm a total heero fan, and can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 09:47 CDT
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I love this story. I can't wait to see how the auction goes (and how Heero handles Duo being auctioned off). I can see Relena being into yaoi and writing it, a lot of people you don't think would like it, actually do. Great job on the story so far, please update soon.
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Title: Omg, I love you.
Reviewed By: AriaLerendeair (not signed in) On: July 06, 2006 19:11 CDT
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I love it already. You are one of my favorite authors and I have most of your stories on my favorites list. The instant I read the sign outside the hotel I knew this fic was going to be fantastic. Not to mention I died laughing for ten minutes or so, then I was resurrected to continue reading. I can't stop now and I hope to find more updates when I get back from my trip to Florida. I feel bad because I never review any of your fantastic fanfiction, but rest assured, it is all great and I hope to see more of it, very very soon.
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Title: Mission Impossible
Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT. I have attended Romance writer's conventions where the same things would go on. There was ALWAYS a cover-model pagent. Can't wait to see how that auction goes. This soooo much better than any Tom Cruise movie.
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Reviewed By: Asaka_sama(unsigned in) On: July 06, 2006 16:59 CDT
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You're starting off slow, but that doesn't matter if you work your way up to an awesome fic! Duo, Heero, and Une are in character, and I love how you really made an effort with grammar and spelling. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: rhiaonna_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!! i'm really loving this, and better yet i've always wanted to go to the Yaoi-con! can't wait for more
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Title: Mission Impossible
Reviewed By: Yayoi On: July 04, 2006 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice first chapter. Hope you will post the next chapter soon.
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