| "I Dare You" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: bigguy1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome
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Reviewed By: Sailor Star Dust On: October 20, 2007 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was awesome! ^_^ The fact that it was WAFFY, funny, and a hentai all in one made it even better! I really hope you'll write those omake chapters, Hunter, because this was a wonderful story! My only compliant is that the ending seemed slightly rushed, how no actual Shinji/Asuka sex ( :( Darn!) was depicted and there was some slight spelling/grammar mistakes. Stiil, great job and I look forward to reading more from you! Feel free to give my stories a read, too. http://www.fanfiction.net/~sailorstardust1 http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296805696
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Shinji and Asuka stories I have read. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: grovewolf On: July 08, 2006 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story but the transformation from bitch to puppy made my head spin, and seriously what were you doing making Jimi Hendrix a security guard at a carnival?
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Reviewed By: tomdj On: July 07, 2006 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job
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Reviewed By: bigboi On: July 07, 2006 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this one. Keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: Kuzy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Great story even without the lemon part. Perfect for a one-shot with the characters still, for the most part, in character.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In character and a lemon. That's an amazing combination. Hope the omakes will be good as well. I enjoy all of your stories. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Hobbls On: July 04, 2006 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the very rare stories that I enjoyed reading for the other content just as much as the climax - and the climax was very good as well. Well done, well done.
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Reviewed By: denisud On: July 04, 2006 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say this was a great oneshot and IMHO one of the best Adult Eva story's so far this year.You really put the effort out to keep them both IC WITh the addition of the time and maturity! And it all led to a vary realistic and belivable love scene that would have been orchestrated by our lovely Ex-Nerv Techtician! Oh BTW I think after the Omake's you should do the same for Rei! Maybe bring back Kowaru so she can have a human life and a love in her life as well! Great job NH! dennisud
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Reviewed By: graybear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Other than some really simple typos this was the best evangelion story I have read. you developed this rather well. If you would read my work Family ties located under Love hina I would apreicate it. And yes i Do misspell things most of the time.
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