Title: Re-Review
Reviewed By: DanteThePoet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there, me again. I wanted to re-review what i was in a rush to finish last time and do a professional review. I'm serious this is one of he most beatiful peace of work I've seen yet and I can't wait to see more!: First i want to comment on the changing between P.O.V.'s i really liked it but it also could have been more gripping without the lables.: Then there's the little one's name that i wasn't sure about. I'm not an expert on chinese names so I don't know if i'm right or wrong, but wouldn't it be more like Ying-Lang instead of Yinglang.: Also where it says "don't mourn for my lost for a long time" also dosen't look like it belongs. i just want to praise your writing so much with so little details and carefully chosen words, I admire this in writers and I can't help but babble on for decades. That's all i hope this review helps. i really hope to see another work soon, I'm starting to become a fan.
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