Reviewed By: twilightsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like the pairings but it was an over all ok story just not my type of thing. You also stated the names too often instead of just using he or she.
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