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| "Dreams Fulfilled" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I "enjoyed" this very much lol. I'm not that much of a perv beleive me! Well, I have to say that this is one of the better lemon fics. It's true! Write more, okay?
| Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Slightly ooc like you said they were going to be, but otherwise i think you captured the personalities of the characters well. It seems kinda odd to me that Miroku would be so persistant about Inuyasha not being with Kagome again, OOC more than slightly because Miroku is pretty perverted. But I cant hold it against you because you said it was going to be OOC. Good job otherwise on the plot and everything, Kagome taking the initiative is definantly a bit of a change over the norm. Good lemons too. Overall a good story. Also, really great spelling and grammar (im usually pretty picky about that) I couldnt find any mistakes throughout the whole story.
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