| "My white dove" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Hinomori Sakura On: July 29, 2006 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story!!!Can't wait to see Rin as an angel!!!That will be really fun!!!Don't you think that it's time to a new chapter??!!LOVED the story!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue-Lady On: July 07, 2006 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked very much of this first chapter!It was really interesting!!I hope you continue this fic, cause it's adorable!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad for your first fic. I like the idea, and I love Sess/Rin stories. Your grammer is a bit off, you might want to look into getting a beta, or just go through and re-read for errors. Good luck with this fic, and I can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^
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