| "What Friends Are For" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inukag4eva2gether On: July 31, 2006 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you had some type errors, but its hardly a good enogh reason to not like ur story. ive always liked the whole best friends/girl next door theme in romance stories. please make it out to be inu/kag. it would really be a shame if it wasn't because u can actually feel the chemistry between them at this point in ur fic. update soon and keep up the great work!!
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Title: Scrolling through MediaMiner
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much to wade though around here lately that I hardly ever do it anymore. I was prepared to hit the back botton when I peeked in here last night. But your opening paragraph grabbed me and wouldn't let go. So here I am at the end of chapter three wondering how everything will turn out. I'll be back when the next chapter is out, and I'm off to see what else you have posted here. Maybe you can keep the bordom at bay for a little while longer.
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Reviewed By: Daiksuki On: July 31, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your style it's very distinctive thus far i love it and i really hope u continue
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 01:54 CDT
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awsome! i love it so far... is this going to end up being an inu/kag cause your other story is sess/kag and i was just making sure...
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Reviewed By: cupcake On: July 29, 2006 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wnderful story:) keep up the good work !
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 14:44 CDT
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definitely keep writing this story. except for the handful of minor typos, this story is really good. looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Taz.Gran On: July 14, 2006 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...to write this type of stuff you must be confined in a life of true love, lust, and happiness. This fanfic truly deserves some serious accolades not only for the descriptive writing but for the story in general, true enjoyment! Guess our gal Kagome is gonna learn the hard way that no matter how hard you try, you cant keep your one & only away.
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 00:13 CDT
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Now this is interesting. The idea of Kagome getting married to Sesshomaru is rather disturbing though. She better not go through with it. She should only be with Inuyasha. So get rid of Sesshomaru and get Inu/ Kag together. Good work.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 16:14 CDT
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knee weakining?....YOU BET! you silly hanyou! This was a VERY funny chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 13, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha. I loved this chapter. Please keep up the good work!
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Title: Hate / Love
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I have a hate / love relationship with this story. I love the fact that Inuyasha is in turmoils about Kagome being with another guy. I like that Kagome is showing him she's not a pushover and he can't always have his way. IIII HATE that's it's Sesshomaru. I never liked him and Kagome pairings so please get him out of the way as soon as your plot allows.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 18:16 CDT
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Oh, boy. Poor Kagome. Inu really enjoys torturing her a little too much. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what's going to happen. Is Kagome going to stay w/Sess or give Inu a chance?
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 14:26 CDT
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soooooo good. yet another good and new idea for inuyasha fandom! (nobody's done this type of story in the inu universe yet, and trust me, I know..I must have read em' all!) soo good job!..will be waiting for another chappie!
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Reviewed By: VampireFromHell On: July 12, 2006 02:55 CDT
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Very Nice. Continue please.
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Reviewed By: Fullmoon's wings On: July 06, 2006 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it!!! please oh please write more. i want to know what is going to happen at dinner. please update soon , love the writing style and the story
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