| "What Friends Are For" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really have to know what happens next. update soon ok
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Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: November 15, 2008 20:54 CST
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plz update soon. it's a great story.
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Reviewed By: inuaeryn On: June 18, 2008 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. I'd definitely keep reading if you continued!
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Reviewed By: cj On: October 14, 2007 20:15 CDT
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hmmm... it's not very obvious where you said that spoiler for who she ends up with was. the only thing i saw that seemed out of place was when Kagome said the tempo of her life would be increasing yet the rest of the fic seems to talk about how her life will slow and settle down after she marries Sesshomaru i believe. Is that what it was? i can't see an increase in the tempo of her life being married to Sesshomaru, it seems like it would become just too boring. anyways, hurry up with the next chapter because it's been a long time since you updated.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 01:28 CDT
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Hey did you give up on this fantastic story. Waiting for a real update,suga. Hope to read ya soon
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Soon!!! i Have to Know what happends!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I WANT TO FIND OUT WAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN WITH THE WEDDING IS KAGOME GETTING HER FEELINGS BACK FOR INUYASHA WILL SHE STOP THE WEDDING TO BE WITH HIM I HAVE TO KNOW!!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! Please update soon! I hope Inuyasha and Kagome get together!
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Reviewed By: desert siren [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea!! I just love the story. I don't consider my self slow, but after rereading (a couple of times) I just do not see where you gave away who she ends up with...So don't worry at least you know that there is at least one person out here who will be surprised... Can't wait for more... (OF COURSE IM IN INUYASHA'S CORNER)
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 01:21 CDT
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just yea..im 2 lazy 2 do all the other stuff..but its a 10...no worries...this story is awesome...plz update soon....gosh Inu is like a helpless puppy...i feel so bad 4 him...
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: March 15, 2007 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first things first...I like the story so far. These a few spelling errors and little things like that but you did ask for a beta to help, so, I hope you find one, it'll make the story that much better. This almost sounds like a real life experience. Is it? Now for my more curious nature. Are you from Missouri? I live in Strafford, Missouri just off I44 about 10 miles from Springfield. Missouri has so many beautiful places to live that are virtually untouched by big city life. I love going into the city but I hate living there. And St. Louis is turning into a concrete jungle. It still hold alot of it old style buildings and houses and the museums, zoo and such are great, but I just love the country life. Hmmm,I'm starting to hear the theme to "Green Acres" in my head. If you're too young to know what that is, it's an old sitcom I used to watch. It's now on tvland or one of those nostalgic channels. Oh, I also noticed you are fond of Rurouni Kenshin, hense the last names of InuYasha and Seeshoumaru. Kenshin as well as Sesshoumaru are my two obsessions.Have you ever read "Frozen Monnlight" by Jane Drew on FF.net? That's what got me into reading fanfics. My daughter thought I might like the change since tv was getting boring and I'm always up at night as my husband works a 3rd shift job. So, yeah...guess that's it and I'll be looking for your update.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is a twist...Love it by the way. It's about time I read a good love story and so realistic. I cannot wait to read more. Chanda
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! u updated!!! as before, excellent chap! times 100! btw, in the ending of the chap, where did she kiss him? hand, lips, cheek??? haha curious me =) update soon, pls!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_kagome2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was awsome plz update 10 4 ever thing
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Reviewed By: Ashley C On: March 13, 2007 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MAN! :) Update soon please!!!
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