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| "Harry Potter and the Scarred Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: March 09, 2007 12:40 CST
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BaDgRaMmEr you pain in the butt. if your going to be a moron about other people's fan works than I think its best you stop reviewing all together. All in all it was a good story. Congrats!. Update when possible, I'm actualy intrugued!
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Reviewed By: Writer-kun On: September 13, 2006 21:42 CDT
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Miz-chan I love you...you're so...um...friend-ish. Badgrmmer do you have friends? b/c if you did then i'm sure you wouldn't be so inclined to pick on people over trivial matters such as the changing aspects of a fanfic writen by a minor, so the next time you reply please think before you type. I do remember many times saying that my story was going to change but i supose that things such as that can be easily missed.
| Reviewed By: Miz-Chan On: September 03, 2006 18:18 CDT
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I'm going to hurt you BaDgRaMmEr. I don't appericate that comment. I'm a loser yes, i say it loud and proud. But when you insult one of my friends... I'll hurt you. DO NOT SPEAK TO HER AGAIN!!!
| Reviewed By: BaDgRaMmEr On: August 31, 2006 22:18 CDT
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I don't know why you try to continue this. The only people who respond are this "Miz-Chan" and other people who have no lifes. I'm happy I have no life, thanks.
| Reviewed By: PaperCrane On: August 21, 2006 21:24 CDT
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Michelle seems to speak in run on sentances, *quote*" Well it's an ancient type of magic that used to be used by the whole magical world but then it was lost don't ask me when I can't remember, but great witches and wizards in Japan never actually forgot it they thought that since the rest of the world forgot about it then it was their own fault so they kept it a secret but still taught it to those who were native to Japan then later to others who asked for higher teaching.*unqoute* Let me add a few periods and commas... *quote(corrected)* "Well it's an ancient type of magic that used to be used by the whole magical world, but then it was lost. Don't ask me when, I can't remember, but great witches and wizards in Japan never actually forgot it. They thought that since the rest of the world forgot about it, then it was their own fault. So they kept it a secret, but still taught it to those who were native to Japan. Then, later to others who asked for higher teaching.*unquote (corrected). It's much better and dosen't sound so imature. Just a light hint. I think that if you fixed some of those erorrs, that it would sound much better. Also, your story line is great, but some other things need tweaking... Don't use, 'like' so many times, my way of knowing I used like to many times is counting all the 'like's I have and if I have more then my right hand, then I know I have to many. (Because I really doubt you have 23 fingers on your right hand!:P(Not saying you have 23 likes, just an example!)) I think that if you follow these things it would make your story so much better. I like your plot idea and think it has potental, and with a little help could be a great story. PaperCrane.
| Reviewed By: BaDgRaMmEr On: July 09, 2006 15:05 CDT
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You spelled my name wrong, And i don't have a heart, so i don't care about your feelings.
| Title: Chappy 1
Reviewed By: Miz-Chan On: July 09, 2006 15:03 CDT
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You Spelled Micheal Jackson wrong. Miz-Chan has spoken.
| Title: Chappy 1
Reviewed By: Miz-Chan On: July 09, 2006 15:00 CDT
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You Spelled Micheal Jackson wrong. Miz-Chan has spoken.
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