| "Love is Fleeting" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: HYSTERICAL!
Reviewed By: cubangreekchik [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really had me going there! I almost fell off my seat laughing when I saw it was Jaken. LOL. *wipes tears*
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Title: Forgot to tell ya...
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 14:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I got so carried away that I forgot to mention that the "Zot!" was the best written sound effect I have ever seen in my life! That really tickled me.
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Title: ZOT! - I'm Dyin' Here!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! You really don't want me to enjoy a pudding pop in peace, do you? *shakes fist at screen* Somewhere in the world Bill Cosby is lecturing some hapless kid about wasting food while 3rd world kids are starving & I just wasted a perfectly good pudding pop and it's all your fault! YOU SHOULD BE PROUD! Woopeeeeee
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 03:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Aw! Poor, lovesick Jaken. Maybe someday ...
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: January 26, 2007 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
::falls over and dies:: AHHHH! it was... you totally, and i... oh god... I LOVED IT! i laughed my ass off. i really enjoyed this.
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Reviewed By: Angel449 On: January 04, 2007 17:31 CST
Comment/Review:
*laughs* That was unexpected! I actually thought that it was going to be InuTaisho/Izayoi. *giggles*
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Reviewed By: iPoe On: January 04, 2007 03:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Hah! I knew it was Jaken fairly quickly...but the frog! LOL! Read all three tonight just for a bedtime read, but I think I like "Bite worse than bark" (can't remember the full name) the best. Very funny!
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Title: Oh, brother!
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny! Poor Jaken. To be so alone. With a face like his, only a frog would like it anyway. I look forward to your next story. Until then, Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Definitely cute! It took me a while to figure out who it was, and I didn't notice any real errors in spelling, or grammar, or word order and the like. Too funny! It is hard to imagine him in love...lol
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Title: Hilarious!
Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny! I figured it had to be Jaken half way through, but I had no idea who the she was. I started laughing when I realized it was a frog. That's adorable. I love it!
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Title: too funny!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you had me! This very funny and entertaining, and I would have never guessed either the he or the she in a million years. It was also well written. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!
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Title: Hee
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
very cute! i like the writing style too!
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