| "Of Ballet and Bullets" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 07:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for the next chapter and i wasn't disappointed. Marvellous!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 04:02 EDT
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I lost contact with this story for awhile but I'm glad I saved it to my favorites. This was one action packed chapter,so glad that crazy b**ch is dead and that Riza got to kill her. I hope Riza and Mustang talk about what happened to each of them otherwise it's going to eat at their subconcious and may cause trouble in their relationship,they need each other to heal. Ed and Winry are such first-timers it's cute. They've been through alot together it should make their relationship stronger. Update soon
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Reviewed By: SonikaKalia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, this is very well done. The characters are pretty much spot on in their actions and the ways they communicate. The more 'sexual' scenes are as good as the rest and I love how the relationships are posed as real. I absolutly cannot wait for the rest; update soon! Very believable and, all in all, quite a lovely little fic.
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Title: Spectacular plotline!
Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 04:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent story! - This story was an absolute pleasure to read! The characterizations were spot on, (as far as I'm concerned,) and the plot kept me guessing right up to the last second. ~ Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: The Cerulean Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, love it, love it! Please update soon? It's so refreshing to see a nicely written, not overly wordy, original piece of writing these days. Bravo. The Cerulean Alchemist
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 05:52 EST
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I think I'll just add another damnit, update before I go insane. And a thank you for doing a great job on this.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 22:43 EST
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Damn you! This was the worst chapter ever! How could you?!?!?! You better post extra fast now cuz i'll absolutely die if i don't find out what happened to Hawkeye! And Margie deserves to burn in hell! How could she do that to our poor colonel? She's a witch. I hate her. You hafta update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh, damn you. I was so in the mood to write and then I had to read your kickass story. Argh, I say. ;p Seriously, this was really good. A good mix of romance, character develop, action, and insanity. Dear God, you make me jealous. Now hurry up and finish the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aelia On: February 17, 2007 03:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely my favorite FMA fanfic EVER. Come out with the next chapter ASAP, pleeeeease? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kenkaya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, this is quite possibly one of the best pieces of Ed/Win fanfiction on mediaminer. Admitedly, I'm one of those people who usually avoid lemons but for some reason, I clicked on this one (could be the lack of decent Ed/Win on this site) and boy was it a pleasant surprise. Your characterization is great and very believable. I loved all the indivdual interactions! You also have a nice mix of action, comedy, and drama which flow seamlessly from one to the other. Your writing style is fluid with a character of its own which is a rare sight in the fanfiction world. You even managed to get critical ol' me to enjoy a lemon piece when I find most of them cheesy and laughable. Great job and good luck with the writing!
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Reviewed By: Rissa On: December 19, 2006 17:20 EST
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; ; -dies- Write mooooore DX
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Reviewed By: Rissa On: December 11, 2006 17:30 EST
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D: You're driving me nuts!
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Reviewed By: Rissa On: December 06, 2006 17:31 EST
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MOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!
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Title: Sunshine Space Cadet
Reviewed By: Sunshine Space Cadet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love Love Love this story keep it up. Great Job. Cant wait for the rest Thanks for writing
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Reviewed By: Rissa On: October 25, 2006 18:39 EDT
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SFASDGADFHSFVBEDRGD Ch. 13 was awesome!!!!!!! So action packed!!! WITH A CLIFFHANGER!! -Cries- WHYYYY!? WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US WITH CLIFFHANGERS?!!?! xD Awesome story, you rock at writing... UPDATE FREQUENTLY,YO!!
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