| "Of Ballet and Bullets" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rissa On: October 25, 2006 18:39 EDT
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SFASDGADFHSFVBEDRGD Ch. 13 was awesome!!!!!!! So action packed!!! WITH A CLIFFHANGER!! -Cries- WHYYYY!? WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US WITH CLIFFHANGERS?!!?! xD Awesome story, you rock at writing... UPDATE FREQUENTLY,YO!!
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Reviewed By: Rissa On: October 23, 2006 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! PLEEEEASE IT'S DRIVING ME NUTS!!!
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 16:42 EDT
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Oh come ON. I'm going insane. PLEASE MORE ::beggs::
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Reviewed By: Meghan H. On: September 27, 2006 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite nice, not so much of the bad language as one would expect in a story of this nature. You handled both relationships very well. Although I must note, I noticed whenever you wrote a thought down, you used a ` at the beginning. That's not an apostrophy, that a sign used in Spanish. '****' is correct. All and all, I enjoyed you fanfic. (Considerably better than Overhall 2) See more reviews by me at fanfiction.net. My pen name there is Meghan H. too.
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Title: For Chapter 12.
Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 01:38 EDT
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Ever since the fed got shot I always had a suspicion that "M.E." (wink wink) was in on it. Ed to the rescue! I really liked this chapter, especially the ending. I was a good girl and went and downloading Firbird Suite-1919 just like you said. =P Haha, anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Imppala On: September 15, 2006 16:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really entertaining fic that ties in well with the anime... Im looking forward to more like this ^^ Cheers, Imppala
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Rissa On: September 07, 2006 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY!!! You need to keep writing, YOU HAVE TO! >>
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Reviewed By: Child Xylia (I have an account. Is it sad that I just figured out how to review?) On: August 21, 2006 00:57 EDT
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I'm really glad I got into this fic. It's so good. >_< Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 11:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need more, seriously . . . I'm going to go crazy, I love your writing, it's completly amazing. PLEASE UPDATE red PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: howlinatowel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great! i read the other two wen u first put them up and never gota round to reading them. you tied them together really well. cant wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Taut
Reviewed By: DeathangelEX2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole story ,while serious and complex, is funny and action packed. I could never write this good. p.s. I say that it's the chick after Riza. If I'm correct then I'll put another review explaining my theorys. Keep up the good work. Look for my story soon ,Anime Love House!
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Reviewed By: Fangrl On: July 27, 2006 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! Talk about suspense! You write it as if it's real! Sometimes i feel as if i'm actually there! You truly are a creative genius. I can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: lpfan401 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is realy good and an intresting take on the series i hope to read more.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 23:42 EDT
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I began reading your stories just after you wrote A Betting Crowd, and was surprised (I don't usually read lemons, I find them to be lewd most of the time); you write brilliantly, and now I'm enthralled and can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe you should compile all of the one shots into an actual fanfiction? Instead of keeping them separate, yet part of a series.
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Reviewed By: Steeve On: July 06, 2006 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning into a great serires. I've read the other two stories, and I gotta say that I am extremely impressed with the work that you have done so far.
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