| "Sweat, Not Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: KakashiSanzo5790 On: August 10, 2006 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O NOOOOOOOOOO..... gojyo you bastard....go back to sanzo!!!! for some reason that made me quite sad...i really hope sanzo doesnt leave....T.T as far as that chapter goes.....its kicks ass just like all the others...!!!!!!!!!!!! im dying to read the last chapter...and yet i dont want it to come....T.T i dont want this story to end! i love it sooooooo much! ill just have to reread it a lot! ^.^ i almost died again when i saw there was an update..lol! what can i say...i die waiting for you to update! i cant wait for the next (and last) chapter...im DYING to know what happens! please update soon! im looking forward to reading it! ^.^
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Reviewed By: KakashiSanzo5790 On: August 09, 2006 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O NOOOOOOOOOO..... gojyo you bastard....go back to sanzo!!!! for some reason that made me quite sad...i really hope sanzo doesnt leave....T.T as far as that chapter goes.....its kicks ass just like all the others...!!!!!!!!!!!! im dying to read the last chapter...and yet i dont want it to come....T.T i dont want this story to end! i love it sooooooo much! ill just have to reread it a lot! ^.^ i almost died again when i saw there was an update..lol! what can i say...i die waiting for you to update! i cant wait for the next (and last) chapter...im DYING to know what happens! please update soon! im looking forward to reading it! ^.^
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Title: Awww...poor Sanzo
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually poor kappa too. Can't stand the heat, huh? He got some serious explaining to do ...Grrr.... Fantastic writing! Fantastic! Fantastic! I definitely keep this story under my fanfic collection. I respect writers who actually complete their story not just leave them hanging. U know, I honestly went out to buy chocolate icecream after reading your fic...Strange...mmm
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Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 22:36 CDT
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It's supposed to be Good news: end is near. Bad news: end is near. I always can't wait to see how something is going to end, but then as it gets closer I'm sad about it. Poor Sanzo. They better work it out. Please tell me they work it out!!! In case you didn't notice: I love this fic. ^_^
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Title: Chocolate fudge icecream
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 10:58 CDT
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I don't know why but the story reminded me of chocolate fudge icecream. Not strawberry or vanilla or dark coffee flavor. Just simply sweet chocolate ... nice and saucy. Mmm...
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Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 09:20 CDT
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YAY, such a quick update. Poor sick Sanzo, at least he had Gojyo to nurse him back to health. I think we'd all do better when we got sick if we had a pretty red head to care for us. Don't worry, you haven't come close to being too sweet for me. It has just the right factor. Still lovin' it.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan not signed in On: August 03, 2006 22:15 CDT
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oooh absolutely lovely!
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Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so sweet without being too sugary, I adore this fic! I can't wait to see what happens. It's been a while since I read Saiyuki fics and I'm very, very glad I stumbled across this one. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: KakashiSanzo5790 On: July 30, 2006 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are such a tease....T.T im dying to know whats going to happen! AHHHHH!...i need to know! i was rereading the prologue to chapter 7 today when i saw that you had chapter 8 up....i almost shit myself from joy! im totally in love with your story....i cant help but to look every damn day to see if you updated or not...^.^ i hope youre planning on making sanzo and gojyo a permanent couple...^.- youre story kicks total ass! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i cant wait to find out what happens next! ^.^
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Reviewed By: KakashiSanzo5790 On: July 18, 2006 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg! i absolutely LOVE this story.....its sooooooo amazing!...you are such a kick ass writer! i am dying to read more! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!...i cant wait to read what happens between those two....hey what can i say...they are my favorite pairing!
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Title: I Love it
Reviewed By: Yunni On: July 14, 2006 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Gojyo X Sanzo is my favorite paring. Recently fanfic involve this paring is hard to find. At least to my liking. I think the story is not too fast. Make it a bit longer if I might suggest. Whenever you describe something maybe you can lenght it whatever you think can excite the readers. Anyway, I had my fun reading your story. Keep updating, ne?
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Reviewed By: sugarcrazedduckie On: July 07, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story. I must admit that when I started reading your story, the first chapter, i thought it wouldn't live up to it's summary and I underestimated your writing. For that I apologize. I emensely enjoyed the rest of your story, Sanzo's innocence, and Gojyo's developing feelings. A job well done. Please update your story soon.
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Reviewed By: sugarcrazedduckie On: July 07, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story. I must admit that when I started reading your story, the first chapter, i thought it wouldn't live up to it's summary and I underestimated your writing. For that I apologize. I emensely enjoyed the rest of your story, Sanzo's innocence, and Gojyo's developing feelings. A job well done. Please update your story soon.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 08:34 CDT
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I remembered reading this fic a while back & I thought it ended. Hmm ... good that u decide to continue it because I actually loved it. I can't remember reading any AU which have Gojyo & Sanzo 'physically' involved. So this is quite something. Please update. At least u know one person is following your story.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here you are! I had wondered where this story disappeared to. Glad to see it's back and that you aren't abandoning it. And the new chapter was delicious - just the right touch of intense erotic. Slow, romance fics are (to me) so much more fulfilling than the PWP smut/fall right into bed after just meeting stories. Though I do enjoy the smex too *grin*. Yay for Gojyo/Sanzo
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