| "Judoh's Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Candle On: August 17, 2006 21:59 CDT
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nice. now clair is keeping her locked in a room. serves her right, what was she thinking going back?!? she seems to go through alotta stuff unfazed tho. chapter 6 pleez!
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Reviewed By: whitebear33 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story. can you write chapter 6 now.
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Reviewed By: Candle On: July 31, 2006 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! you've posted more chapters! clair is perfect for a physco boyfriend stalker! keep up the great work.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Yelhsa69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I love it! I can't wait for more and keep up the good work! *add to favorites*
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Reviewed By: whitebear33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did a great job on the story. I can't waite for chapter 4 to be writen.
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Reviewed By: Yelhsa69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading this, it has a story line that's like something you would see in like a movie were a boy is obsessed with some girl and he does everything in his power 2 make her his own. It just takes me in and I'm thinking "How far is Claire willing to go to make Tara his?" and it really makes a story like this amazing and so well-thought out. It's not everyday you see a Claire/OFC pairing. GOOD JOB! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Candle On: July 07, 2006 11:12 CDT
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and just when i thought this section had become extinct! i like where the story line is going... but clair seems nice, TOO nice.... it makes me wonder if hes getting to soft for the mafia
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Reviewed By: Candle On: July 07, 2006 11:12 CDT
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and just when i thought this section had become extinct! i like where the story line is going... but clair seems nice, TOO nice.... it makes me wonder if hes getting to soft for the mafia
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