| "The Demon's Blackmailed Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blah. On: February 22, 2007 01:19 EST
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Come ON! It has been freakin months!!! I don't mean to be rude but...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Crescent_Moon1021 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 17:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AGREE WITH inusbabygirl PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inusbabygirl On: January 31, 2007 21:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING STLYE PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU IM DIEEEEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!! =)
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Reviewed By: CrescentMoon1021 On: January 02, 2007 18:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the beginning of a new year and I know your readers which include me would like it if you update very soon! It has been over 4 monthes since you have last updated please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank You
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Reviewed By: Sapphira1212 On: December 01, 2006 04:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story, it's awesome!! And I disagree with some of the other reviewers, I don't particularry like how forced inu and kags relationship are, but I understand it. He is a dog demon, he has to make his mate submit to him. And she was being a bit unreasonable, I mean, sure it looked like he was cheating on her but still, she should have at least heard him out :( Poor inu...Poor kag as well Anyway, I love this story and I cant wait for the next update! I consider it rude to beg for an update...but in this case..PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! Sorry, but I honestly cant wait for the next chapter, I love these kind of fics about inu forcing kag to be with him for some kind of something and he is in love with her and stuff....weird I know, but it's the kind of stuff I like lol. Well yeah anyway, Please update soon!! P.S. I agree with Mandy1212, furry handcuffs and whipped cream would make for an ..interesting...and sexy lemon. lol, a bit kinkier than I would think but still an interesting concept just the same haha.
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: November 24, 2006 10:36 EST
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Please update soon! I check this site literally everyday looking for your work. Can't wait for the honeymoon fun!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Crescent_Moon1021 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story so far, please updae soon. I can't wait to see wat happens next. Will Sango find out Miroku? Will kagome find out that inuyasha was the one who introduce the girl to miroku? So many questions....need more updates...again please update soon.. I know many ppl r waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: I have a hint
Reviewed By: Mandy1212 On: November 10, 2006 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a hint for the lemmony goodness....furry handcuffs and whipped cream! Yuuuummy!! lol
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Reviewed By: Deathangel232 On: November 03, 2006 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say this is a very interesting story you've written. Although I don't like the relationship that Inuyasha and Kagome have in this story and that fact that Inuyasha forced Kagome into marrying him just because of some money her family owes. I'm a little affend by this because marriage is a very sacred bond. Its a special bond between two people that love each other and respect one another and for Inuyasha to use such a sacred bond in order control Kagome is just sickening. Also in chapter four, the sexual contact was a rape not a lemon. Even though Kagomes might still have feelings for Inuyasha, she was still raped. You need to know the difference between lemon and rape for next time. I'm not trying to say that you story is "bad" or "you need to do this or that." You have every right to write this story the way you want too. Your doing very well and I encourage you to keep writing this story. I not trying to make you feel bad. I'm just telling you how I feel about the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome. Other then that, your story is very good and I'm looking forward to you updating when you can.
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Reviewed By: goddesskagome213 On: November 03, 2006 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a excellent story. I'm shocked that Inuyasha would do something like that to poor kagome. I hope you update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. Plz Plz update.
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Reviewed By: pls update On: September 20, 2006 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE U GONNA UPDATE THIS STORY I KNOW SCHOOL HAS STARTED FOR U, BUT SHOULDNT YOU HAVE SOME FREE TIME TO UPDATE?????
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Title: Heh
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 04:09 EDT
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I'm sorry to say that I didn't review for as long as I did. By the time I finnally got to read your story like you asked me too (remeber what you wrote in your review for my story Desert Rose) it was weeks (or maybe months) till I finnally got the chanve to dit down and read. I really like the idea going here! I wonder where Inuyasha's and Kagome's relationship is going after thier wedding night. Oh, And i am SO happy about the pairings. Too many people put Kagome and Sesshoumaru together. I hate that!! ANYwaaay, love it! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Im_PHAT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 12:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
omg please updateeee please?
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Reviewed By: amazedreader On: August 28, 2006 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it please please pleaase update soon can't wait to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: IC On: August 20, 2006 02:20 EDT
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awsome chappie
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