| "The Demon's Blackmailed Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: August 09, 2006 17:26 EDT
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omfg omfg please update!
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Reviewed By: ragingtoujikin On: August 09, 2006 17:25 EDT
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omfg omfg please update!
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Reviewed By: Shotgungirl On: August 09, 2006 11:50 EDT
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This is so good, I love it, please update, pretty please with a cherry on top!
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 23:27 EDT
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dat was awsome
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Reviewed By: Im_PHAT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 06:37 EDT
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awesome story. please update soon. =)
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Title: Undecided
Reviewed By: Kakashi's gurly On: August 03, 2006 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am totally undecided. I do agree you have made him a little dark and I find myself hating him at times, but then theres that part of me that want to see if he will soften up and it will become a happy marriage. And again theres that other part that is like YOU STUPID MUTT WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!? I LOVE the whole story line , pure genius, undecided on weather I like inuyasha or not. And bad me I was hoping to find out how the wedding night went. *sigh* Inuyasha is sexy and rich and a total dream, but what is happieness without love? Can't he see how much she feels unloved? Kepp up the good story. After seeing the end to Inuyasha, the seires, I don't think anything cud upset me. Major dissappointment on that final episode!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 19:05 EDT
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I love this story! I can't wait until you write the next chapter. I was also wondering, now that Kagome is Inuyasha's wife, is he really going to let her divorce him after 7 years? Especially if they have a child?
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Reviewed By: hollyhill On: July 31, 2006 00:35 EDT
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I think you've made Inuyasha too hateful in this story. I actually hope Kagome can get away from him in the end because he is not a likable person and if she does end up with him, she'll just look stupid or or he will look even more cruel and hurtful than he already does. I don't understand why she let him in her apartment at all even if he did have cooks with him. It was her apartment and she had the right to refuse. You've made her look spineless, weak, and appear to have no self-respect. 'Sorry, but I think you've made Inuyasha's character too unsympathetic for anyone to like him. I hope Kagome can get away from him, otherwise this story will only show that a bully who takes advantage of other people's sorrow and misfortune can get everything they want if they are cruel enough and have enough money. Poor Kagome...
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: darksaint On: July 30, 2006 14:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I love it god the ending was so freaking funny poor kagome though and Inuyasha god he's such a horn dog your fan darksaint
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Reviewed By: inu_inu_luvluvunregistered On: July 30, 2006 06:17 EDT
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oh woooow!! really good, it's getting better all the time, can't wait till you update (hiding a BIIIG butcher knife) SOON!! i love your long chappies and really... i'm all excited of this! keep it goin'
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Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG thanks For Posting this Its great !!! I love It and I ADORE the Rin/Sess Pairing so Lookin Forward to Reading More
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Reviewed By: kicheria On: July 30, 2006 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it so you must write more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good!!!! I love this story so much!!! Please update soon!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon (not signed in) On: July 29, 2006 23:21 EDT
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Hmm, interesting story...you certainly have built up quiet a situation with a high amount of tension! I can't wait to see where you go with it, and how the 'happy' couple works out. Figures Kagome would be stubborn about listening to him (she certainly did it enough in the series where Kikyo is concerned, lol) and he would be hard headed and go about getting her the entirely wrong way. It's amazing those two haven't done each other in yet! But I suppose it might happen yet, lol...but hopefully not! I guess we'll get to watch some good old-fashioned fireworks until then! I hope you post the next chapter soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: daisie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 22:45 EDT
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your story is really good. i can't wait to read what is going to happen next. But is miroku really seeing another woman behind sango's back? if yes, i hope she is going to make him suffer. or more like you are going to make him suffer since you are the writer. lol
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