Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
satan...... i got a kick out of that. put a little more description into it, though it is pretty good so far. try to sslow down, it seems as if things are to blunt currently in your story. update soon, i'll read & comment again then. ~~~
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