| "When Tamaki is Away the Children Will Play!" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: az On: April 20, 2009 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually skimmed the first paragraph. Some of the sentence structures both me but I laughed out loud. "hakuma-like pants," I immediately imagined the cactus. Google image it, it's worth the laugh. Anyways, I think your CAPSLOCK key was stuck in the on position a few too many times.
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Reviewed By: Smallfrye11 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more!! I want to know more!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 04:52 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a good story, please continue it. put tamaki either with ayame or nekozawa, then put one twin with kyouya and the other with hunny.
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Reviewed By: cowgirlkitten2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say this was different. i liked it and i cant wait to read more of it now. ht eonly thing i ask is can u put spaces between the sentances instead of making it one whole big paragraph.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: otaku623 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!! WRITE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 10:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
more more must have more does mori and haru live happly ever after who knows???
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more must have more WHO has beary!! i gave you a 7 in grammer because your words tend to run together and it is very hard on bad eyes (hint: try double spaceing) ^_^
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Title: wowzers
Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowzers please continue want to know what happens when daddy tamaki finds haru-chan and mori-kun together^_^
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