| "Unfaithful" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: pink_princess18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic. I like the angle you took even tho im not a big yamcha fan. It's a unique story and point of view keep it up ^ _ ^
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Reviewed By: ss10009 On: July 24, 2006 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I really like it. Everyone assumes Yamcha is the cheater and that Vegeta got together with Bulma out of sympathy but since when was Vegeta sympathetic?!?! And besides, I really do think that Yamcha loved Bulma. + I love Rihanna's song Unfaithful, the way you wrote it was great and the whole story unfolded to me like a replacement to the music video Great fic!
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Title: coolies!!!
Reviewed By: thoughtless [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it.....unfaithful is my fave song at the moment too, so thats double coolies!!! such a cool fic!!!!! i want more lol!!
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Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, definitely, Bulma cheated on Yamcha, not vice versa. From both Dragonball and DBZ you get the feeling (if you're really paying attention) that Yamcha is too terrified of other women to be able to relate. Even in DB she accuses him of cheating, but in confidentiality he once told Oolong, "Bulma is the only girl for me. Loved this and what you did with it. :) Wish more people wrote fics that didn't bash poor Yamcha. :)
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