| "Sweet Care" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: sumomo48 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like it. it's great. you did a good job on it. i agree with Inusana, that would be a great ending. with them falling in love and all. but that's just one girl's opinion. i love it. please up date A.S.A.H.P. (as soon as humanly possible)
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Reviewed By: Inusana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the idea for this fic. You did a great job on it! I sorta think that you should end up with them making love because of the way the idea is. But that's just my opinion. I love your style of writing.
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