| "Scar Tissue" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: denisud On: July 10, 2006 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall exactly what a hentai story should be... a 'story' with sex in it,and not 'sex' with a story in it. I also like how the relationship developed, slowly and lovingly, and as Maya was you could have dropped Rei in the first half of this story. Obviously with Rei's connections to Shinji I can see the use of Maya here. And the ending which surprisingly didn't include Maya finding out she's pregnant, hehehe! Overall a great story, PLEASE write more with different pairings with Shinji. dennisud
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Title: I really like your work!
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic work! I generally like longer stories more than the really short one-shots, but this was amazing and quite original too. I've don't remember ever reading an NGE fanfiction that put Shinji and Maya together unless it was one of those harem fictions. Once again, I'm finding your work wonderful. Keep it up for the good of the people ^_^
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Reviewed By: bigboi On: July 07, 2006 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great read. I like the characters and their development the plot and basically everything about it. Keep on writing. You are one of the few good ones.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 11:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
very well done
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