Reviewed By:white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 20:02 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I liked it a lot but..... you are in desperate need of a beta (or editer if you will) If you don't have someone in mind let me know and I'll be happy to beta for you. P.S. I Looooovvveee your OC, I totally want one.