| "Wind Knoll's Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
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Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! Just some minor spelling errors, but nothing big. I love this story as well! Please, keep up the good work! I look forward to many more updates on your fics!
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Reviewed By: morwen_re not logged in On: June 30, 2010 13:23 CDT
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Yay! Another chapter! It's good, up to your standards, but there were a few typos in there. It's still great though, and as a writter my self i know how it feels when you have another story working in the back of your mind. Hope you finish Naga Knight soon so you can get back to this one.
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Reviewed By: Shadow runer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are amazing!! thank you for taking the time to write these fantastic stories!! you make my day everytime there is a new chapter :)THANKS
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Reviewed By: morwen_re not logged in On: October 22, 2009 12:21 CDT
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Gah! I've been waiting for this fic to be updated for so long! Yay! Just the pick me up I needed for this godforsaken rainy day. Good job on developing Scarlet's character more and giving us the scene with her mom giving birth. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re not logged in On: June 10, 2009 22:37 CDT
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Yay! Another update! I love this story and how you mixed elements of Silent Hill into Yu Yu Hakusho! I love how Jin and Touya interact with their worshipers, and Kurama and the ice master have duets... Too bad Jin doesn't like to play with others, but I can understand that goes with his personality.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: April 02, 2007 21:56 CDT
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yay! an update! i'm so glad that scarlet moves out... but will her dad give her up for good? just wondering.
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Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 10:09 CDT
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yay! i'm happy to find another update, two in fact! sorry i haven't been on for a while to r & r... i've had a ton of hw from evil professors who seem to think that no has anything else to do. so, what's going to happen when scarlet and blossom get back to yoko's temple? anything interesting?
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 31, 2007 20:49 CST
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yay! i'm happy! well, not exactly, but this update was the bright spot in my day. i love the way your making jin develope and the way you keep scarlet so real. i can't wait for the next update! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 09, 2007 11:00 CST
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yay! you finally updated! i was starting to wonder what happened to you... this latest update is spooky, yet i still can't wait for the next one! please update again soon, please?
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 10, 2006 07:49 CST
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yay! sorry i haven't reveiwed in a long time... i had a lot of evil papers to write and i'm still not completely done with one of them, but i took a break to read! good job, i can't wait untill the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 22:59 CDT
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great! you do deserve a cookie for this one! but wait, who is this figure in the fog... he doesn't sound like toya and i don't remember anyone from the anime with golden eyes and cat ears... is this an oc? hm? i want to know! gah! i hate not knowing... please, please update again soon! you helped me break some writers' block for my essay i have to write! thanks!
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Reviewed By: morwen_re not logged in On: September 01, 2006 21:39 CDT
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great job! it's up to your usual standards and i can't wait to see the next chapter! if it's soon, i'll give you a cookie! yay! just tell me what kind of cookie you want.
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Reviewed By: yodaihiro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely like how you started this, and once again I'm very much impressed with your originality. The first chapter set up alot of suspense for me, and I'm quite anxious for the next chapter. I think horror is a good genre...but anyway I like how you did the five 'gods' with Yoko Kurama, Hiei, Jin, Shiwakamaru, and Touya. That's just too cool. I haven't ever played Silent Hill, but you might get me interested in it with this fic. Anywho I really like Scarlet, and I hope she gets away from "dad" but anywho...I'll be looking for the next update to this awesome story!
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Reviewed By: Raistlin Windblade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even if this is only the first chapter, I can already see a huge hit out of this. Everything about it sets the mood perfectly for the horror and suspence to catch the reader and I couldn't be prouder of what I see here. The characters, emotions, detailing , atmosphere and originality make this story one to look forward to and I cannot wait to see more chapters emerge to see what happens next. I'm definately hooked and more than impressed. Pure gold. X3
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