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| "The Smell of Charcoal" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb Chapter! Please update soon!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good start. Very well written and very descriptive of the scene. I like it. And the idea may have been done before, as you have said, but not all ARE the same. I like what you have thus far and would like to see how this goes. So update when you can, :D
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