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| "One for the Ages" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 13:24 CDT
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this was a great story, i'm glad i found it
| Reviewed By: Ama-chan On: January 25, 2008 21:02 CST
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I just thought it was amusing that, Takahashi, can use the Japanese character for the adjective taka(i) which means tall or expensive. Thanks, you write well.
| Title: :D
Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 22:43 CST
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I demand you write more newbie epics! >o *Demanddemandcoerce* Ahem... anyway, I really enjoyed this fic. Seriously, characterizations were great, and the plot was interesting without being too "WTF I'm lost. D:" If it was boring I wouldn't have read the entire thing in three days. You had grammatical mistakes littered throughout, though, which isn't a huge problem but... "feat," "week," and "later" were some of the more numerous offenders of using the wrong word because it sounds the same. Damn that spellcheck. I know you said you needed a beta, but in all seriousness, I do beta for a handful of people on a regular basis and I also take the occasional "Silver, randomly beta this for me." So if you want a beta reader, I can at least promise that while I'm not familiar with all fandoms, I'm good with grammar. Eh, who am I kidding, you already know that... >_> ANYway, last thing I wanted to say was the ending--wow. For a while there you had me scared that you were going for the stupid, cliche, this-could-never-happen ending, but then you picked the right one. Bravo. Best part of the whole thing, in my opinion. Remember to write more newbie epics like this, okay Sexy? :D *Shamelessly flirts with in reviews in an attempt to horribly embarrass him*
| Reviewed By: Rai Terra [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im only on chapter 12 so i dont know the end pairs yet but i think kagome should be with hiei, they make a funny couple. This fic is starting to sound like a sango/hiei fic, which i guess is okay. But im liking in very good and original.
| Title: pairing
Reviewed By: kyuubiflmaes On: October 22, 2006 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im liking it allready, but who are the pairnings?
| Title: One for the ages
Reviewed By: Crazed One On: August 13, 2006 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe more people havn't reviewed this story! I stayed up all night to finish it! What Hiei did at the end sucked but otherwise this was a great story! Good job putting Kenshin in there too@
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far please update soon
| Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:59 CDT
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HAHAHAHA! He is so gonna get his ass wooped! Please update soon!!! Thanxie POO! WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
| Title: LOL.
Reviewed By: Trysted Punished Inu On: July 09, 2006 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Often, i am not a fan of these types. So far, yours is doing better than most. Keep up the good work and lets see some more of what you got in writing.
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