| "Shards of Me" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 17:35 PDT
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this is the best
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 16:43 PDT
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just keep on riting
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Reviewed By: PowerofJonas On: October 17, 2006 09:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i've seen this being updated but i have this really bad thing of not reading a story until its established itself with a few chapters, so i thought ok i'll read this now, and i must say it so well written with such a captive story line that i wish i'd started it earlier. I'm hooked i can't wait for the next chapter you come up with, very well done!!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 19:33 PDT
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Wow, the second to last chapter was heart breaking. I feel so bad for Kaoru. It seems like he had always been pushing her away. The heart can only take so much. Kenshin is going to realize it too late.
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Reviewed By: Rhapsody Rasche [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 09:55 PDT
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wow. i loved this story. the plot is simply brilliant, and the storyline is EXTREMELY captivating. i love how you convey all of their emotions, especially the confusion that they have toward each other. i find this story simple irresistable; i look forward to reading the rest.
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Reviewed By: i8Cait On: August 22, 2006 16:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual. Your updates just brighten my day! You did a good job 'translating' a dojo scene into a more modern flow. I especially like the idea of Hiko cooking! Until next time!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 17:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm really going to enjoy these interludes. Seems like a nice way to integrate history into the story without going on boring, unrealistic dialogues or something. I thought there first meeting was quite sweet, leave it to Kenshin to save someone in need. Nice chappie, thanks!
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Reviewed By: I8Cait On: August 03, 2006 17:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fiction is so awesome. It makes me cry when I read (no mean feat I assure). I wish you would post it on FF.net...I think you'd get more reviews that way. More reviews=gratification for you. Oh well, until next time! Poor Kaoru and Kenshin...people just love messing with them, don't they?
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 19:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, powerful chapter. I know he think he is doing what he is doing for the best but he is being a real shit by going hot and cold on her. She was hurt too. If only they could actually talk about it instead of just wondering and coming up with poor excuses. I liked the chappie bunches and I await your next update!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 19:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheesh, where are all the reviews for this fic?! I think it is absolutely fantastic. You write with so much emotion, they both seemed so raw and exposed. I don't know who I felt worse for. I thought it was so endearing when he felt his love rising just to seeing her all bundled up in the blankets, so sweet. That kiss was beautiful too. It seems like a great deal was said. I absolutely love your writing and I really hope that you continue this fic. I think you have a potentially powerful storyline. I'm really excited about this story and I can't wait until you update! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: dragonmumu64 On: July 09, 2006 03:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good writing. I enjoy this story so far, please continue...
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