Reviewed By:Mrs Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 22:24 CDT Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Plz oh plZ updatde i love it i love it i love it. Why don't you mail it to me at kuramas_bride_to_be@yahoo.com Ps I love it
Reviewed By:LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 18:40 CDT Comment/Review: hello :) your story is quite interesting. I like the way things are going and it's quite funny :) only two peices of advise. 1. is when you do your author notes in the beginning ot end of your chapter it's best to put enough space between so the readers don't confuse it with part of the story or change the color. 2. is i would recomend a beta. in cause you don't know they are people who can read your story and help you make it beter ^_^ lol i know they are a wonderful help because i have 2 of my own ^_^ for your very first story i relly think you did a good job and i can't waitr to see how you work your story. i wishu the best luck in writting your story and try not to loose your inspiration ^_^ goodluck! ja ne1
