| "Inuyasha gone poisonous" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: October 03, 2006 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah, that was evil to stop there :( More, more, more!
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Reviewed By: dumbguy On: September 30, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay...i liked it in all, but....WHEN ARE YOU GONNA FINISH THE DAMN THING!? :F Not trying to sound mean. I'm just curious.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 15:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
heloo not trying to sound pushy or anything, but are you ever gonna write again?
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple2 On: August 09, 2006 11:53 CDT
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I agree with a couple of the other people that reviewed, the author's notes right in the middle of the story brings the entire story down a couple of notches. I read something once that said that if you REALLY need to say something (like in an author's notes in the middle of the story) do a * and then say it at the end. Story-wise, it's a good plot idea, similar to only one I've read before (which is surprising), but I think you could have done a lot more with this, stretching it out and developing the relationship. I'm sorry if you intended this as as one-shot and therefore, PWP or whatever. I just love to read novel lengths and so I'm always a little disappointed when I read what could be a rather good full length fiction and its intended for two or three chapters.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kag-inu-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your fic continue it, you left it in the best part ^.^ its really good bye
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Title: ugh!!
Reviewed By: Jalen On: July 19, 2006 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
c'mon man stop makin us wait...UPDATE :( plzz....!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great Fic!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never thought about making a snake bite Kags in order to have InuYasha have sex with her... good excuse, I like it. It's sneeky and yet very strait forward... I could just see dog-boy tripping her to the ground, and lifting her skirt and hips so as to 'suck the poison out' *cough cough* excellent! Can't wait for you to update, I'll be around for the next chapter! -Kinoko
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 14:21 CDT
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ha ha ha, now THATS what I always thought inu would be like durng sex. not this mushy inu everyone always writes about. (not that theres anything wrong with that but I just always saw him more like this, thats all) Anyways, I laughed and thought it was totally IN character for him to "accidentaly" slide up there. haha I can just see it now, with his look of concentration, while trying NOT to look like he was doing it on purpose!! hahaha inu.. bad dog! anyways great story keep it up!!
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Title: AHHHHH
Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 11, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL!!!???? YOU STOPPED IT!! YOU SHOULD BE ARRESTED FOR GETTING PEOPLE (Me ^_^) SO WORKED UP AND THEN STOPPING!!!!!! Please update soon!!! OHS
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Reviewed By: psychokitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What the hell? Finnish the story all ready will ya. And just when it was getting good. Oh and I agree w/ dumbguy and mace.
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Reviewed By: dumbguy On: July 10, 2006 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with mace down there. We get it. but still, very good.
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Reviewed By: mace On: July 10, 2006 19:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
An interesting hentai romp, but please leave out your parenthetical comments (insert sexual innuendo *cough*). We get it really, and we know you do too.
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Title: great idea!
Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 14:26 CDT
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Now that was funny!, also it was great idea that had not yet been done! (I am getting so tired of reading the same stuff all the time and it being soooo repeatitive) 'I know I must have spelled that wrong' So kudos to you!! :)
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Reviewed By: scarlettt On: July 10, 2006 03:11 CDT
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din't leave it off there it was getting good! And yes I know I'm a hentai, but who cares, it was an awesome chapter.
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