| "Inuyasha gone poisonous" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: SimplyIndefinable1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 22:12 CDT
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Poor Shippo...lol.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: I AM A WRITER ON HERE!!! FLAMINGFOXFIRE On: January 05, 2009 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE ENJOYMENT FACTO METER WOULDNT GO HIGH ENOUGH...I GIVE YOU...A 15! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! YOU GOT TO WRITE A SEQUAL!!!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 15:40 CST
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loved the fic :D and the end was really funny...:D good job!
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 11:37 CST
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Are you really going to hold out on us much longer on purpose?....or do you have other stuff going on? I mean I KNOW all to well what its like to be distracted, but COME ON! theres been more than enough pause for dramatic effect! (if you have something dire going on PLEASE don't kill me! I know its not an authors job to cater to a fans whims sooo...maybe an authors note or something...PLEEEAASSSEEE!)
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Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fun, Fun, Fun, for every one, (random...yes) Anyways Loved your fic so please continue!!
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 14:33 CDT
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'stands up and starts jumping' yayayayaya!!!! ABOUT TIME!!!! 'shrinks back with hands up' sorry just kidding, don't hurt me. just got a little over excited there. phew now that thats out of my system... glad to have you back! & great chapter!
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Reviewed By: katie... On: October 04, 2006 12:36 CDT
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no! what the hell! i read this in school and you dont even finish!!! geez. update this soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: October 03, 2006 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah, that was evil to stop there :( More, more, more!
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Reviewed By: dumbguy On: September 30, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay...i liked it in all, but....WHEN ARE YOU GONNA FINISH THE DAMN THING!? :F Not trying to sound mean. I'm just curious.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 15:06 CDT
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heloo not trying to sound pushy or anything, but are you ever gonna write again?
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple2 On: August 09, 2006 11:53 CDT
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I agree with a couple of the other people that reviewed, the author's notes right in the middle of the story brings the entire story down a couple of notches. I read something once that said that if you REALLY need to say something (like in an author's notes in the middle of the story) do a * and then say it at the end. Story-wise, it's a good plot idea, similar to only one I've read before (which is surprising), but I think you could have done a lot more with this, stretching it out and developing the relationship. I'm sorry if you intended this as as one-shot and therefore, PWP or whatever. I just love to read novel lengths and so I'm always a little disappointed when I read what could be a rather good full length fiction and its intended for two or three chapters.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kag-inu-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love your fic continue it, you left it in the best part ^.^ its really good bye
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Title: ugh!!
Reviewed By: Jalen On: July 19, 2006 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
c'mon man stop makin us wait...UPDATE :( plzz....!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great Fic!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never thought about making a snake bite Kags in order to have InuYasha have sex with her... good excuse, I like it. It's sneeky and yet very strait forward... I could just see dog-boy tripping her to the ground, and lifting her skirt and hips so as to 'suck the poison out' *cough cough* excellent! Can't wait for you to update, I'll be around for the next chapter! -Kinoko
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