| "Life Inside the Chemical Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, this was a sad ending but with a touch of sequel or something like that. Yuugi is right about this, "Life is unpredictable". I have to say, Nick may have left, but he'll be back. This ending was a bit down emotionally, but still it was all good. There will always be hope, be it big or small. Linkin, excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not care about the Yaoi, but the duel itself was great and also it seems that the relationship between lovers is off to a rocky start. I hope to see more of this soon, my friend. Keep it up!
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Title: what?
Reviewed By: Sonic402 On: December 07, 2006 21:03 CST
Comment/Review:
What the hell? I thought this story was completed, you left me a bull shit cliff hanger! You better finish it, I cant stand sad crap!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Nick got shot down badly. He won the battle with Duke, but he has a ways to go now from winning the war. Anzu's gone, but can he win her back and explain this misunderstanding? I hope so.
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems that a lot of mistakes have been laid on the floor, and also that amends are in the process. However, I feel a dark and ominous danger is looming on the horizon. And it does not bode well for Nicholas or Tea. I hope the two take precautions and stay as safe as can be. Phoenix, nice work! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 22:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Shakes head* It was all going good, until she opened her mouth. Tea, you really need to let go of the past. Otherwise, you will not have much of a future. That I know too well. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 11:36 CDT
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I see Nick and Tea are coming together, but as with all first relationships, its going to be a rocky one. I hope that the heart can endure a lot of emotional pain and pleasure. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 18:53 CDT
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Well, some minor spelling errors here and there, but probably due to computer. In any case, nice job! Keep it up!
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