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| "Family Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: t recorder On: October 31, 2006 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovd it lovd it bring yami in it more hes my faviorit carictor 2end is bakura and ryou lov the parings plz anzu deurves the pharaoh or yugi or marik or malik chosie one plz
| Reviewed By: t recorder On: October 30, 2006 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took yugi 8 years to complet the puzzle and its so fuuny i laughed my head off
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 03:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry for your loss, first of all, but get back to writing once your muse hits again. Still, these latest three chapters rock. Still, I have to ask, Strawberry tea, does that really exist? I've never heard of that (just a little curious about it is all). Still, keep going, mixing elements of the various stories of Yugioh is interesting. Still, my favorite dragon, Choas Emperor Dragon: Envoy of the End, is never seen in a fic. Would love to see someone use a chaos deck that used that as one of their best cards. I would like that, but this fic isn't about duels, at least nto yet. I like that, it focuses more on the story instead of the card game. THe flow of the tale is more important than the games played in it, I think. THat is why I like this fic. Plus, I definitely want to see joey and Seto together. They make a cute couple, so Kawaii!! Anyway, keep up the good work, and the frequent updates, taking loinger than 2 weeks to update a story of this quality is not so bad in my eyes.
| Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is with people not reviewing your stories? their fantastic. i love your "of the light series" and your oc's are great. i like how you've modified this story, it really cool. i love all of your stories, even the ones i haven't read yet. please up date soon.
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