| "HARRY POTTER AND THE CIRCLE OF MAGIC" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Fascination [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 12:11 CDT
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I dont like this chapter ,... |
Reviewed By: solace_no_tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 20:42 CDT
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Nadesico has magic abilities? Now I've heard it all.
Er... would Yue cry? Personally, I think he might have an anguished look, but not really cry as he's already been through too much to cry that easily. Yue's still pretty much in character with a few loopholes, but Sakura's not acting like her character. Don't tell me that she's a)grown up, so her personality changes, or b) a person won't act his or her usual self when grieved. When Syaoran left her, it was also something for her to grieve about, but she didn't act like she wanted to kill somebody. Anyway, Fujitaka had half of Eriol's magic by this time. Unless of course, half of Clow Reed's power isn't enough to put out a fire or something.
My last advice. Get a beta reader. |
Reviewed By: Li's Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee. Sakura is becoming more like a Slthyerin( |
Reviewed By: Mystical_Fascination [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 12:57 CDT
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Slytherin ?!!?!? Slytherin !!?!?!?! Slytherin ?!!?!? i am shockEd ! thats so evil to put thr m in there !!! AAAAAAAAAAHH !!! I LOVE THIS STO5RY ANYWAYS WRITE MORE PLS. ~~~ |
Reviewed By: Keewi-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! I love this story and the Cherry Blossom one. Please keep writing, you're very good I just have to know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: GoRgEoUs_GaL On: June 03, 2002 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey KangaKilla!
Great fic, really original and creative.
I was shocked when Sakura went to Slytherin but I know why Syaoran wanted to. I only have one fic and it is called A Month In The Life Of Final Fantasy and my email address is tifa45@hotmail.com. But there is no . at the end that's just a full stop. Keep updating this fic, it's really good!
Bye! |
Reviewed By: Sakura Maniac On: June 02, 2002 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a good story. I mean, I was shocked when Sakura went to Slytherin, but other then that, I see no complaints. Hah! Syaoran burging into the Dursleys with a sword outstreched. Keep on writing! Please, for my sake? |
Reviewed By: meow On: May 12, 2002 18:09 CDT
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the only part of uk were i come from is you are in high school
when you turn 13 but we still have primary and middel!!
any how nice plot keep going!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SADia On: May 03, 2002 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Ryoko it me Saida-ikram i went to your shool for sometime (SouthWist HS) E-mial me some time if you see this (aquablue58@hotmail.com. By the way i like this fanfic it intersting and has 2 of my favert Storys.But iam kinda mad that it dosnt have Kero in it >, |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: April 21, 2002 21:36 CDT
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Thankyou for your reviews, heheh ok well ill make Syaoran meaner persoanally i was actually thinking he was getting to mushy so ok, but i put them in slytherin so hehehe he'll change ok well im glad someone likes my fic hahaha |
Reviewed By: ryoku On: April 21, 2002 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is grate no mater what anyone sais. I realy don't care a bout spelling much and i think its a good thing that your puting your fic up. It has a good main idea and i like the fact that Syaoran has cards to. And to prove its good Sakura CAN give Syaoran cards by eather ordering them to follow Syaorans lead or to erase her name and put Syaoran's name on them.and i like Sakuras atitude becouse shes a mixture of sweet and mean and i think that a NORMAL person should have bolth emotions. The only thing that i don't like is that Syaorans to nice and is geting along with people to much. I like Syaoran becouse hes a little like me, dosn't like telling people stuff about him self openly |
Reviewed By: heeropika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2002 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting, Very interesting. I thought that Syoran woud be going to Slytherin without a doubt, but Sakura?!? I don't see any qualities of Slytherin in her. I wonder what happened to Kero and which house did Clow Read happen to be in when in Hogwarts. Oh yeah, WHERE'S THE BAD GUYS? so far only that guy. The Dursley's don't count, but I would've like it better if Syoran HAD beaten the pulp out of Dud-ley one time. It sure might make him much more slimmer. Continue!(not that you need the pressure, but, can you please comment on my fic: The creation? Thanks!) |
Reviewed By: Sakura Kinomoto On: January 03, 2003 08:24 CST
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I LOVE THE STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaira On: January 03, 2003 08:25 CST
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Please write more chapters!!! |
Reviewed By: solace_no_tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2002 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, but I really don't have anything nice to say about this fic until you improve this. The comments are that:
1. You got all their characteristics wrong. Sakura is supposed to be sweet, gentle, ...you get the rest. But here, she's acting just like SaKUra Avalon. All flirty, know-it-all...If you want to give her a different personality, give a reason why. Maybe she'd gone through some trauma or other? Syaoran is a really cool person who doesn't make friends easily and does not talk much to people he doesn't know. The rest, you should have it in the books of HP.
2. It's Gryffindor, not Griffindor. You have the books. Just flip to any page during the school term and get the correct spelling.
3. Sakura CANNOT give any cards to Syaoran. The cards belong to her solely. The cards FEED on her power. They've already been transformed. Oh, and technically, Syaoran is not a Cardcaptor.
The very last thing. Will you please watch the original Card Captor Sakura? Or if you want the story to stay this way, post a sign saying it's Cardcaptors, and change all the names please.
I'm not saying that I'm perfect in characterisation, but I feel your characterisation of the CCS characters are really wrong. |
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