| "HARRY POTTER AND THE CIRCLE OF MAGIC" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 06:19 CDT
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this fic is absolutely awesome! i love it. update soon. p.s your an auzzie? so am i. yay! australia rocks.
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Reviewed By: jenice_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is a good story after all. U has good creativity. I LLLLOOOOOOVVVVEEEEE it VERY MUCH!!! Please, keep on the good work! I would like 2 c the next chapter!
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Title: I like your story!!!
Reviewed By: Cheesy girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 08:00 CDT
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WHEEEE!!!! I'M GONNA WRITE CCS and HP STORIES TOO!!! But first I need to gather info! *runs to library*
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Reviewed By: Cheesy girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 07:21 CDT
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Wellllllll.... Nice, the story is... Oh yeah, Tomoyo's last name is Daidouji
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 10:36 CDT
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THAT WAS A MAJOR OVER REACTION ON SAKURA'S PART ON TO YUE! and the new character is....difffrent. BTW I think Sakura and Syoran are getting way to much freedom at school...But this is a good storie!
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Reviewed By: RoTTeNxPeaCHeS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story it's a very good one and I like how you got the Harry Potter and CCS characters to blend into one thing...eh...i dunno how to say it.... anyway it's a good story and I hope you continue it!! |
Reviewed By: Miryah On: July 23, 2003 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ ooohh!!!! this is soooooo kool!!! and by da way Tien Juing means warrior of the sky, just to let u know heh heh ^^" im part chinese so...yeah. update, upload, or watever this place does for updateing does, do it soon!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aileen On: July 18, 2003 16:07 CDT
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Cool fic! Erm...not so cool spelling, I'm sure everyone can still uderstand it. Maybe you should run it through a spell check to give it a more "professional" flavor. Otherwise it's great! Everyone's still pretty much in character unless there's a good reason they're not. Keep going!
(If you'd like to know, Tien Juing means Sky warrior in real Chinese. ^_^) |
Reviewed By: Sprinket On: July 10, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!! So plz put up the next chap cause i'm dying to read it |
Reviewed By: Majou On: April 03, 2003 17:39 CST
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What kind of old Chinese do you mean? There *is no* old Chinese. If you're referring to the early dynasties like Tang, Song, etc., they have *dialects*, they don't speak "old Chinese". Surely it isn't that hard to research something first before you write? And Yue wouldn't have let Sakura's family just burn. Even if Yukito was in shock, I think Yue would have been calm enough to emerge and thereby get rid of them. Why did the strange people even want to burn down their house anyway? Fujitaka has magic at that point of time at any rate, he could save Touya and himself, right?
And also, Sakura's reaction is too extreme. She's like another character altogether. Maybe, she would have just stared in shock and then ran away or something. She certainly isn't so violent as to try and strangle the guardian whom she tried so hard to be friends with. |
Reviewed By: Mei-taru On: February 01, 2003 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm....no.(taru) Blah! (mei) |
Reviewed By: krazy_kitty_katz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 13:36 CDT
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i luv it so far!!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz write the next chapter soon!!! plz!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really good. I love it. Can't wait to see how it terns out. Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Mystical_Fascination [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 12:11 CDT
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I dont like this chapter ,... |
Reviewed By: solace_no_tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 20:42 CDT
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Nadesico has magic abilities? Now I've heard it all.
Er... would Yue cry? Personally, I think he might have an anguished look, but not really cry as he's already been through too much to cry that easily. Yue's still pretty much in character with a few loopholes, but Sakura's not acting like her character. Don't tell me that she's a)grown up, so her personality changes, or b) a person won't act his or her usual self when grieved. When Syaoran left her, it was also something for her to grieve about, but she didn't act like she wanted to kill somebody. Anyway, Fujitaka had half of Eriol's magic by this time. Unless of course, half of Clow Reed's power isn't enough to put out a fire or something.
My last advice. Get a beta reader. |
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