Title: Nagged, huh?
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bahahahhaah! You know why I nagged you? Because I really enjoyed the first chapter when you posted it on DA, and I really enjoyed this one, which is saying a LOT since I haven't seen the anime. Your story is interesting enough, though, and I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! The story is written with an interesting narrative without becoming too cynical or jaded but with a light touch of it here and there along with very nice description and an overall light tone that is missing from so many stories today that tend to take themselves way too seriously, and that is something that I commend you on! Hopefully there'll be a third chapter? (ah, the nagging starts!) I'm looking forward to reading more about Ran and Sakura! The only real 'thing' I noticed (and it wasn't enough to truly jar me out of reading) was the use of Lady Samurai, which I found to be very nice, but there were a few times when you capitalized "samurai" and other places where you didn't. I think it should be capitalized since you're using it here as a title. Other than that, though, VERY strong and VERY enjoyable read once again! Now I'll go haunt my inbox for notifications of updates on this story ... :wink:
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