| "When Love and Death Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and then there was none... to get emotionally invested in a story and then nothing. you are a gifted and talented author and you haven't written anything since febuary! even if you don't finish this you shouldn't stop writing...thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:00 CDT
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It's pretty good so far. I can see why you were nominated for the IYFG cannon award. Your characters are very in character. You could use a little grammatical check here and there but otherwise not bad. Do you plan on continuing? I get the impression this isn't the end? Thanks!
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Reviewed By: InuxKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 01:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is coming out really good. love it! please update sooner!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 15:34 CST
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Yet again, you do a fantastic job! I can't wait for more :)
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Inuki-chan9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely written, I'm excited to see the full extent of this story...I love that last part about the short skirt comment! Haha, great start you have here! I can't wait for you to update!
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Title: inuyashqaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 18:56 CDT
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I like this. Lmao @ the part where Inu was changing his clothes. That was good, lol. I like your description of a growing up/courting Inu. Now I'm just waiting on the angst-ball to drop, lol. Update when you can. "D
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 14:31 CDT
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"Unfortunately Dell and Satan seemed to have a bastard love child other wise known as my computer." I love that it is great to see a new chapter.... I put this on a different story...
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Title: carry on with the good work
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok look im down for a sad emotional roller coaster in this story... but imma beg.... yes BEG.. for you NOT to kill Inu I mean... that like really gets the tears worked up and with how good you write i know its going to be well written mean good descriptions and so on and so on... I mean if you do decide to eliminate Inuyashya... go right ahead... Imma like the story anywho... and plus anyway.. im just a reader and your the writer... next chap as soon as possible PLEASE... kk lates... Yasha
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: inuyashafanfictionfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great story i really didn't pay attention to the style of writting and spelling and grammer. i have seen quite a few stories with this kind of plot but yours and a very few are my personale favorites. you had me sucked into your story from the very begining hope you update soon. keep writing really great story don't let any of those other mean and insensitive people get you down. Sincerely Inuyashafanfictionfreak
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 16:50 CDT
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Am I the first review? This story looks like it going to be great. Can't wait to see when your writing have an update, but I know how it is. I just updated my story after 3 months :)
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