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| "Stalked" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: GizehK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2010 16:25 CST
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wait! thats all! o.o I mean.. I love it!! really good and amazingly written.. but, is this all?? Bakura just disappears?? awww... >.
| Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nicely done. I believe that I especialy liked the word choice you used... such as in the start when you called the clouds pregnant with rain. This was very well written, I enjoyed it. (I'm sorry the review is so short... I can hardly write good reviews on ones like this ^^; )
| Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (NLI) On: July 22, 2006 02:46 CDT
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Enchantingly beautiful, quite well done. Sexy vampire Bakura, gods I love that! And a willing Ryou is even better, damn that was hot. And I must say that recently vampires has been on my mind a lot, must have to do with me reading "Interview with the Vampire". lol. Anyways, would've wished it to be a multi-chapter fic, but regardless the one-shot is very nice, and the ending is too. Well done. Hope to see ya around. ^_~
| Reviewed By: Tjay Motou(nli) On: July 17, 2006 13:13 CDT
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One problem... how many shirts was Ryou wearing that night? My guess is three... but other than Ryou's shirt getting taken off three times... it was hot... there's something... slightly arousing about stalkers... maybe that's just me... hahaha... good fic... I liked it... I wish you would write more too it... I think you could form a pretty good plot with it.
| Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: July 11, 2006 21:28 CDT
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Bakura was written beautifully. I really enjoyed his character in this fiction as a vampire. He stalked Ryou for some time, choosing his victim carefully, wanting him from afar. Cold, brutally honest, calculating... but still damn sexy and Ryou wanted him back! Oh, yeah! Ryou was rather bold there towards the end! A bold Ryou is a lovely Ryou. It's a shame you intended this as a one-shot... especially how you ended the story, you could definitely continue it... Very nicely done.
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