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Reviewed By: Luner Fox Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it and I think it's a pretty cool idea but it would be nice to see some longer paragraphs. ^.^
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Title: keep going
Reviewed By: kag_inu12012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The thing I noticed is that you have a lot of things to do with the army in your stories. But anywasy you should comtinue.I am not pushing you cause I know you are working on another story but update soon.
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Reviewed By: kyonkichi-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 06:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it, it's a good fic, but could you make it longer, plz?
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 11, 2006 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL!!! Update soon.
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