| "Under the moon-- Unbridled passion!" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 19:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: midevilmeg [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more for it pretty please
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Reviewed By: takari_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This reminded me of so many other badly written heat stories. "OMG I'm in heat SCREW ME!!!!" The only redeeming quality was you didnââ'¬â"¢t have Kouga be Seme and Kagome found out without getting horny or pissed. The actual writing was so/so and the characters weren't too off. Seriously, the way Inuyasha and Kouga were paired up and the way they acted was pushing the limits, but I can overlook that. If this continues I may stop by, but donââ'¬â"¢t expect the shameless fan-girly squeals that come with most reviews. I suggest you not write like your telling a story but rather like someone who is observing. Close your eyes and describe to us without interrupting and speaking outright to the reader. It makes the story a little less enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: Greentea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 06:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. It was funny. Anyways, keep up the good writing. I give it 100%.
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have succeeded in making my day wonderful! Great fic!
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Reviewed By: sesshykoi0106 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 05:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
DAMN!!!!! That was so AWESOME!!!!! I loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, love the ending, great story you have here, lol! oh, and by the way...i popped your review cherry becasue im the first! yeah im ur first! lol sorry, but yeah grea Kouga/Inuyasha story, keep up the good work...
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