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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant stop reading this fic pls pls pls update soon =)
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Title: update
Reviewed By: squad8andamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon plz
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: squad8andamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I freakin love it update soon plz
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Reviewed By: rawpassion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 04:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I was a bit overwhelmed by how 'perfect' you made Naruto out to be but the training seems to cover most of the bases. Oh, and a little innuendo never hurt anyone, aye....
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome really enjoying this fic read it like 15 times pls pls pls update soon cant w8 4 next chapter
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Title: meh it's good
Reviewed By: XoreandoX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta congraduate u on a good story hope to see more updates from you afta all you dont c good stories like this often
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Title: GENIUS
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 09:20 CDT
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i need more. this is awsome.
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Reviewed By: happybunnies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cool please update =)
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with Shadow_Man. At first this seemed a bit iffy but once it hit the Uchiha attempt on Naruto's life, it got very interesting. I Hope u update the fic real soon because it is the best NarutoXHarem fic i have seen on the website.
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 30, 2006 12:49 CDT
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oh that fic was great, one of the best ones arround. i really like the polygamy. oh that is goint to be a good surprise for later. by the way for all you people who dont know what that means, poly=many and gamy=women or wives. also the way to pronounce it is with the 'y' making an 'i' sound. ill let you guy figure out the details of whats going to happen when everyone else in the fic finds out that naruto can have more than one wife, heh heh heh. hope you feel enlighten cuz i hate teaching. well my work here is done and once again great fic.
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Title: post script
Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 05:24 CDT
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p.s. i also noticed that your 8th chapter seems to end with out naruto showing off, i mean whats up with that. i hope you update soon and like i said before i really like your fic, so write more!!!!!! well its gettin late. more like its really early!!! holy shit?!?!!! i stayed up till 3:30 am!?!?!?!!!!! well i got to go to bed so i can atleast function in the morning cya l8r
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Title: pretty damn good
Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 05:18 CDT
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the further i got in the story the more i liked it. at the begining it was kinda iffy, cuz it is kinda hard to believe that all of the clans wanted him but as the story got further on it really filled up nicely. i mean damn who wouldn't like all that also i liked how u compaired his dragon to the others like a doberman to a couple of poodles. i have to admit this fic was, like i said before, pretty damn good. sorry i cant help with grammer cuz like i say to all the people's fics i r&r i wouldnt no a spelling and or grammer mistake even if it came up and bit me in the ass, like a certin dog did to mizuki. anyway i g2g so cya l8r
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Reviewed By: darkprince32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very, Very nice please update soon this story is really getting interesting
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Title: Sugoi!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 22:58 CDT
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I must give you a 10,10 rating on EVERYTHING!! *looks up with huge hearts in her eyes* oh...my...freakin...GOD! I love this story!!! Please update soon and dont make ur fans wait, like, 3 months like some authors do, PLEASE!! Ja Ne
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this story and i must say i'm impressed. it's clear you put a lot of thought into it. i think the eight chapter is incomplete though. i hope you update soon.
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