| "Tangled Emotions" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ On: December 10, 2002 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE tell me I don't have to wait 8 months for the next chapter. sigh, Bulma's a lucky, lucky girl... |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2002 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, i ant say this was anything like I ever imagined it, but you wrote it like you were there. I hope Goku doenst miss his wedding, but he doesnt seem to mind anymore anyway. Great writing style |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 24, 2002 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! Naughty authors! Naughty G/B/Y!! I loved this (I can't believe I said that). Don't care much for threesomes, but this day has been so strange that I figured *oh wtf, might as well contribute to the weirdness and read something completely different*. Yamcha was so nice to Goku in showing him what to do and Goku...well, what can you say about Goku, except that up to that day his idea of a hand job was using a Phillips screwdriver ^_^. Bulma is so lucky!! Great job ladies!! |
