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| "Hanyou of the Caribbean" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 18:56 CDT
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holy crap, you're brilliant!!!! I also thought of Pirates when the Black Pearl came into the InuYasha story, but you managed to fit Miroku's incarnation in there too? and in Captain Jack, no less?!?!? HILARIOUS!!!! Loved it, totally genious. you should continue it!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 23:07 CST
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and i didn't want to read it at first thinking it was going to be something goofy. then i got to read some of your other pieces and decided to give it a try. true to your literary magnificence you came through on this one splendidly! your portrayal of the scene and characters was so realistic that as i read i could clearly smell the stench of stale, liquor, sweat, vomit... things one would imagine in such a place. as if i was transported there, witnessing the interaction, no longer seeing the black on white of the text on the screen. truly amazing! ~ a pleasure, ginny
| Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 23:52 CDT
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This fucking cracks me up... Jack Sparrow as the reincarnation of Miroku. It's great as a one shot, but if you ever get inspired to write more, let me know. I'd read it. ARGH! Ye weave a good yarn, wench! (Forgive me for the bad pirate pun. They're genetic.)
| Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 13:23 CDT
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I really like it so far! Just the idea of Jack and Inuyasha sitting down and having a drink makes me giggle, but the hints of story sounds so great! I really hope you find some time to finish this, I would love to read it! :D
| Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! Seriously, this was really interesting and believe me when I say I hope that inspiration hits you and you do continue this one day. The only thing I would like to suggest (constructive criticism, if you will), is that you be careful with your dialogue and commas. I noticed in several places that instead of closing out the dialogue with a period, you continue with a misplaced comma. Other than that, I think this was wonderful! The plot was interesting and from what I've seen so far, the characterizations of both Jack and Inuyasha are on par. ^_^ Thanks for sharing! Hopefully I won't have to wait long for more, but if I do...well, it's more than worth it. I'm just happy to be able to read fresh meat as this. There have been so many poorly done pirate fics, but I believe this one has great potential. :D Thanks!
| Reviewed By: inuyashasramen (NSI) On: July 12, 2006 15:34 CDT
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Really good so far! I've got an idea for Sango's reincarnation. You know the woman with the straw hat on Jack's first crew? I think anna maria is her name. Anyways I think she would be perfect for the part. Please Continue! ^_^
| Reviewed By: GIGGITY On: July 12, 2006 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was actually really good the basic story line and all but i do think u should let kagome come back as well kagome that would be good letting them all set sail across the sea and have sango there to reincarnated as someone else tho just have kagome be herself
| Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: July 11, 2006 23:21 CDT
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Oh, Gawd!
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