| "Thee Untamed Soldier" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: usakochic On: June 21, 2009 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg! i cant believe you only got 4 reviews what is wrong wit this ppl! this story is very much intriguing, i love it! Most of all we are in 2009 and there has been no updates for 2 years? are you still interested in finishing the story? You should post on fanfiction.net you are gonna get a ridiculous amount of reviews. mediaminer sucks on ppl reviewing.. please let me know if you will update tbnena11@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter. You did have some spelling mistakes and a few names that did not belong in the story. What I mean is that you meant to write one name, but put the other.
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Reviewed By: poison_ivy On: August 03, 2007 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far i'm loving it! its a great fanfic! i'm looking forward for more chapters. This story is one of the few who have caugth my atention. i've only started reading today (03/07/07) and i just couldn´t stop reading it. I hope you still update. ps. i did not rate spellig and grammar because i'm portuguese, but from my point of view they are also great. lots of kisses, all the way from Azores (Portugal)
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Reviewed By: Pretty good On: July 13, 2006 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, this is fantastic. The only problems I can find are grammar and spelling. But your idea is original, for the most part. There are a lot of stories in which Vegeta kidnaps her and whatnot, but in yours she does not have parents...and she is not constantly inventing things (yet?). But I do believe that this fic is quite good -- you must have put quite a bit of thought into the storyline. Lemme tell you, it was worth it. Please continue with this story, I believe it is well worth it.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 12, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, VERY interesting story. This was really good. I can't wait for an update.
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