| "The Story of our Lives" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha seperated from Kagome by time and her seals. I know Kagome will miss her friends and Inuyasha and will eventually return, hopefully in time to save the day. It should be interesting.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about multiple cliffies. First there is Miroku, Sango, and Shippo situation cliffie, then there is Inuyasha and Kagome relationship cliffie, and finally Sesshoumaru and Hana relationship cliffie. I can't wait to see how it all works out.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny inuyasha was like "Man i wish i could ignore her like that" That was funny i was drinkinh=g soda and it sprayed out my noes because i was laughing to hard!
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Reviewed By: Belle(not logged in) On: November 23, 2007 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!!! You have to update! I just started getting into this story and you just drop off like that! So not fair... I relly enjoy this story. please update soon. Please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... a bit confusing with what happened to hana in kagome's time... will kagome go back to he feudal era... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... hope inuyasha & kagome stay together in the end... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: OI
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi will you hurry the hell up and update already. geez sorry didn't mean to lose my temper but update some of us ae waiting on YOU! just so you know so plz update soon k.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirl08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 19:41 CDT
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I like this a lot, especially the revised version. The original was good too though. Can't wait for more!!!
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Title: It has potential, but . . .
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:08 CDT
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I like the personifications in your fanfic, and I think that it has a lot of potential, but I just wanted to point out that when you are on your period you are NOT "in heat". A female is in heat when she is fertile, about ten days after her period. The "period" is the shedding of the uterine lining, therefore a fertilized egg cannot attach to the wall of the uterus, and therefore a female cannot even become pregnant. Just wanted to point that out. Keep on writing your story and keep the humor bouncing. I love your character, Hana, and I think that this piece could become a truly delightful comedic romp.
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was funny and delightful . i really hope u update soon it iz good keep up the good work.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 14:36 CDT
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ahh update o.o that was a sexy funny chapter xD so please update soon allways watching BethieK. p.s. ill tell my friends to read it too ^-^ the more reviewers the better ^-^ anyway yeah updaet soon.
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 22:24 CDT
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??????????????????????????I hate you, cliff hangers suck-ass! Write more soon please?
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Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 20:12 CDT
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Okay I'm sorry this story is going well and all just one thing that drives me crazy. Your period is NOT when your in heat. A female ovulates 10 days after her period when her discharge becomes thick and creamy in order to catch semen. Your period is actually the safest time to have sex- in other words the only time a female is Not in heat- because that is when the old egg is removed from the body, the new egg drops during ovulation.
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Title: o.o-crys-
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just had to tell you that i love this story and dont not update because lack of comments people are just getting lazy these days anyways cant wait till next chapter please update soon (i love these kinds of storys xD)
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