| "An Early Morning Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: shinkamigrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 02:01 CST
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It's good so far. I love the plot. You could do with a bit of editing though. If you want, I could help you out with that. By the way, I remember hearing the name in the anime "Mirage of Blaze." Ayako Kadowaki was the host body for Haruie Kakizaki.
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Reviewed By: narutos alter ego [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
wooooooooooooooow write more! heeheee
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Reviewed By: DracoDormiens [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 01:40 CST
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Hey there. By the way, Kadowaki is from Final Fantasy VIII, not VII. *proud to be an expert*
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 17:41 CST
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this fic is soooooooooooooooo totally amazing!! i cant wait 2 c wat happens w/ sasuke & naruto after this. plz, plz, plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: kitsune07200 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 15:01 CDT
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I love it! Keep up the good work and please update soon!
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Title: nice review
Reviewed By: blk_roze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this!!! but i do have a suggestion... if you could write longer chapters!!! ONEGAI!!! onegai=please ~blk_rose~
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have so gotta write more please^^
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Reviewed By: Meemei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. I wish we could have seen Sasuke in the outfit though. And Dr. Kadowaki (sp?) is from Final Fantasy 7 I do believe.
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Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the funniest fics I have ever read! Please don't stop there. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 17:11 CDT
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ass face
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Reviewed By: Kastor354 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excelent story. I think it'll do great. It's already going well, and I love the SasuNaru couple! ^_^ Hope this one doesn't stop early like all the other really good ones I've read.
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