| "In The Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 23:30 CDT
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awesome! that chapi was hecka good! i can tell ur improving! and the fanfic is really devoloping so i give u props! lmao! anyway keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Goth Angel848 On: October 01, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I used to think love sucked.UNTIL I read your fanfic about Neji and Tenten.It's so beautiful. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, WRITE THE NEXT ONE, I'LL DIE WITHOUT IT!!!! And because this couple is about the only one in the world that doesn't suck.After all even I need SOMETHING to look forword to in my life.
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Reviewed By: Alone393 On: October 01, 2006 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason this fanfic RULES to me is because I always LOVE reading stories like this and the Neji and Tenten couple ALWAYS has a soft spot in my heart. I only saw maybe 2-3 typo's.
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Title: forgot to login
Reviewed By: Isabell/ spookygal On: October 01, 2006 11:39 CDT
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I like this story. I like this story so much that I hope you will update soon. If I were in Neji's shoes I would have beaten the shit out of that guy but then again I am a girl so yeah.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 02:46 CDT
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aww dangit! i'm jealous! u have more reviews than i do for 'Couple Trouble'!! [sighs] w/e, oh right good job, funny chapter! lol, haha wellll keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:16 CDT
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wow, O_O, that was funny, the dog bit lee, lol, up date soon, please
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Reviewed By: tenten On: September 12, 2006 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE! I HAVE NOTHIN BETTER TO DO IN MY COMPUTER CLASS CMON! I LOVE NEJITEN FICS!!!!IM 14 IN NEW MEXICO AND I DEMAND THAT U MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: forgot to login
Reviewed By: lisa/supernaturalchic1 On: September 10, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was so so. please update soon. p.s.I put my fanfic on the site. come see it. warning:tentenxoccness
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Reviewed By: spookygal On: September 10, 2006 13:53 CDT
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thanks for updateing i can't wait to see the next chapter. this story is awsome.
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Reviewed By: supernaturalchic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The part where Neji was screaming don't cut my hair was SSSSsssssssoo funny!
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Reviewed By: supernaturalchic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so FUNNY! *laughs* but I wonder...what ever happened to "Three Again"?
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Reviewed By: supernaturalchic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it and I could just picture in my head as I read it! 10/10! (P.s. It's me, Lisa)
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: spookygal On: August 26, 2006 16:35 CDT
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i demand that you update as soon aas possible!!!:>
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 01:36 CDT
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hey i didnt say u had bad grammar i jus said (in a diff way) that theres always room for improvment, u read my fic look how diff chapter 1 is from the latest chapter (lol i've forgotten) anyway seriously good job nd dont think u have bad grammar! that makes me feel bad for making u feel bad. anyway keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: I loved it
Reviewed By: LunaEstrella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it But tell me what she forgot!! oh and I'm reviewing for naruto. Don't slap my baby!!!! or I'll eat neji.
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