| "In The Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 15:34 CDT
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your welcome, and that was better then i thought. so update soon. im hucked, damnit, oh well, update soon. Geany 101
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey good job with the fic, i jus want to let you know that when you're writing you might want to put things in past tense at times or use a different word besides said BUT (lol) i'm a grammar freak (jus ask Geany 101) anyway ur fics getting on it's way and if i ever have an idea for u i'll make sure to send it ur way. ok keep up the good work! ^_^
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Title: Hey again
Reviewed By: LunaEstrella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey again. I think this lastest chapter was aswome! I can't wait to see the plan!
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Reviewed By: Black Rose317 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 11:47 CDT
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Hey Tenten It's Hinata.Nice story keep up.......im bored. you should check mine out as soon as i get it on here.See you at school
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Title: HEy tenten
Reviewed By: LunaEstrella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey tenten. Its Temari. I just wanted you to know that I'm gonna be posting my tenten and temari story up when i get back to america. But I just HAVE TO say this.............AWSOME!!!! ...don't forget sakura and my little hints ....*cough*clothes*cough* yeah but keep up the good job. YOU GO GIRL!! okay I'l review when your next chapter is put up but for now..See ya
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i love this fic and here's an idea, have them go swiming in the river. just an idea scents you said you don't have one. Update soon please, can't wait.
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Title: Who
Reviewed By: Mehgan On: August 03, 2006 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Which one tenten or hotaru
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Reviewed By: spookagirl(lazy) On: July 23, 2006 12:15 CDT
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i love this story i hope you update soon.
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Gum Gum Brothers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so funny! There's a few spelling/graamar errors, but it's great. But I made a Naruto fanfic "Disney World to the Max" where Ten-ten and Rock Lee fall in love in one scene in both chapter 1 and my upcoming chapter 2 . I hope you don't mind because I don't want to change anything. :(
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Title: good job^_^
Reviewed By: sakuragirl On: July 22, 2006 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was like a really good fanfic, comtinue!!^_^ Please and thank-you.^_^ oh, and good job!!^_^
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: spookagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 22:27 CDT
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wow... i like that story. i hope you update soon. i'll be checking every day. i always did think Neji and TenTen would get together.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 16:33 CDT
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ok so this is the real author of Couple Trouble Geany was being a lil brat nd read my reviews, but enough about my account privacy problems. ur fic is really good! it definately earns a spot on my favorites! keep working at it cuz this will become a very popular fic
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 11:46 CDT
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I want to know more
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Title: that waz cute
Reviewed By: anime _fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
you kinda messed up a few words but over all i loved it
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol this is Geany 101 and i red you review for cuple truble and red your fic its funny your rely good and keep it up,up date soon.
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