| "The Group" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've out done yourself this time JB!!! I can't believe I never got around to reading this one!!! I never knew what I was missing!!! Goten's such a goofball, that's why he's my fav......... GOOD JOB!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 06, 2002 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I was in a foul mood until I saw that you updated this fic. I'm so glad that Bri finally came around and that they're gonna go public at the party. Poor Marron, she's gonna be real hurt but that's life. Now that B/T have been spotted will Bra break the news to Marron herself or give B/T the pleasure of doing it themselves. Guess I'll have to wait to find out. Great job JB! |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good job, JB! Finish it, Kay? c ya!
sr |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 12, 2002 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!! I'm so happy you decided to update this fic (I hope The Show will be next on your list-hint, hint :D). I think Bri is being testy cause she's more attracted to Trunks than she's letting on. I hope Trunks plants a super wet one on her lips and maybe she'll drop her defenses. Thanx for the dedication, you're so good to me *sniffs*. The way I look at it you put alot of time and effort in writing your fics, so the least I can do is throw some encouragement your way. So far every fic has been a winner. Keep up the great work ^_^! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 14, 2002 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Ya gotta love Bulma. She'll bust Vegeta's chops any chance she gets. I guess A date will be the only way T/B will be able to figure out what it is that they feel for each other. Update soon (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 10, 2002 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh, I think feelings are gonna start to develop between Trunks and Bri. Poor Marron, I feel sorry for her. Write more when you can. Btw, when are you gonna update Veggie's Shopping Adventure? Just wanna know. Ja |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 07, 2002 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny how I was thinking about "The Show" a couple of days ago, and here's the sequel. Good start to it too. I guess everything turned out ok betweeen Vegeta and Trunks. Update soon (^_^). |
