| "takari destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: digiobsessedfanatic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2002 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
its not finished,i got writers block, i need a second chapter to finish it with :) |
Reviewed By: Dragona On: April 09, 2002 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fanfic very interesting and I was on the edge of my seat trying to figure out if she would go. But of course in the end we all know she will because Kari and Tk are truely a destined pair. Great Fanfic! My one suggestion would be find a way for them to stay with the rest of the gang! lol! I really enjoyed reading this though. Keep up the good work! |
